Aww man, I thought there was going to be one about Prom, a football game, or even Band Camp. High school is loaded with a bunch of short story ideas.

:D Garret, a hero till the end and the legend still lives on even after his passing :')

This *sniff* was so *sniff* sad!
It was also the best chapter yet.

Believe it or not sign In. Make this a seprate story And delete vihan. That ain't gnna work. Thanks.

*Dies from the epicness* AMNSFLMV NWBDKLGKNBJKNDWFKJHXF KNSFBHJFBWDLVKUBSXVLHWDBFIVW X:JFOBF! Ok now that's out of my system, I can't decide wither it should be a separate story because of the simplicity of knowing where it is but then again I could always go to your profile and see it... yeah make it an independent story :3 and people REVIEW! I want the next chapter w

I love this. Loved Kei's speech, loved Garret's speech, loved the Razgriz chant and salute. It was awesome!

Hmm. This is interesting. Can't wait to see how this unfolds.

*Faints from the epic conclusion* I went to my brothers Graduation and this just makes it fresh in my mind... or is it the fact that it happened last year? Meh, but still you made the perfect ending for this short and I say, when I feel sad that a wonderful story ends and I want more, we all know that it's a great story. God now I wonder how Garret meets the Dragon Flies will turn out w

Well then. He fainted, eh? Okay then. Interesting. Hope ya update soon!

Well, to be honest, I'd be alright if you did a graduation scene, but that's entirely up to you. You are the author, after all.

Heck yes I want to see the graduation! After how good this chapter was! I especially love the "Queen of the Razgriz". Can that be the valedictorian/saleuditorian introduction..."the Queen/King of Razgriz"?

Oh god the inner gun geek is coming out BRACE YOURSELF! This is just me but from what Garret saw when Clarkson was shot couldn't have been a 7.62 NATO round and could easily be a round form a 12.7x99mm or .50 caliber. The .50 cal can easily touch a target over a mile-and-a-half away and the this shot was easily with in a quarter of a mile to about 500-600 yards. The .50 cal. can do stuff to you man... gun rant over XD As for you putting in cliff hangers (ಠ_ಠ) no... just no... I hate cliff hangers but it does bring up suspense for the next chapter. For the graduation part, hmm... that's a tough one. The story was already resolved with Clarkson getting his ass kicked and Garret saving Nagase, though it would be nice to see something special for Garret. I mean he got SHOT with a BULLET and I don't think that the graduation will be enough to satisfy every ones feelings towards Garret being a hero. Maybe concoct something special ;)

So much better than I thought it would have came out. I like it and the moment where Garret kicks Carlsons ass came XD I LOVED IT!

Well, then. This was a rather interesting shot... Not bad at all. Great job!

This came out A LOT better then I was expecting. I knew it would be good, but that was awesome.