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| wierdIT 2008-01-06 ch 4, | abuseBravo! I love it! You seem to understand time and paradoxes and all that sort of thing better than the average person. Either that, or I'm just of less intellegence than the average person. =) This story is so well done, and so originally thought out, even while being a fanfiction. Your characterization of Homunculus was precise, and not many of the stories I've read so far have pulled that off, only three, actually, and I've read quite a few. Thank you for the story, I enjoyed it immensly! Though I doubt you'll write a sequal, if you ever want to, I support the idea 100 percent. |
| LegolasAnimeLuver 2007-04-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseSO COOL! I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER SOON! |
| steven 2005-09-30 ch 4, anon. | abusegreat play on the game and it good to see that you have explined how they break the loop well brillint |
| Zero-Vision 2003-08-09 ch 4, | abuseCool, I just finished the entire game myself and this certainly settled my mind even if it's not. er... before I confuse myself I'll stop here k. later |
| lain 2003-08-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseThat. Was. Such. A. Good. Fanfic. This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I love the plot. I love the writing. I love everything about it. ^_^ |
| shona 3000 2003-07-05 ch 4, anon. | abusehi this is shona 30 i love this fanfic and i love the idea maybe you should write more. but you don't have to. shona 30 P.S it's just a thought. |
| Jazzmaster 2002-08-18 ch 4, | abuseI can't ever remember getting so engrossed in a fic before. I like the way things get tied up, and I like the way you write for the characters too. Great stuff! |
| MetalKatt 2002-08-12 ch 4, | abuseI like this fic. *drools over Hom's new outfit* You reunite so many different threads ino something beautifully together. Congratulations! |
| WritetotheDeath 2002-08-10 ch 4, | abuseWow! O_O I could read this over and over again! It's amazing! I love how you write Hom, it's great. Please say you're going to write more SoD fanfics. |
| Angel-chan2 2002-08-09 ch 4, | abuseNice ending!! ^___^ At least everyone's satisfied in the end! Loved it! Can't wait for your next fanfic, as I've said in my previous review! |
| Angel-chan2 2002-08-09 ch 3, | abuseNice!! I'm pretty impressed with your writing style. I like it, and I detected almost NO type-o's in this whole thing! Oh, and I'm looking forward to those outtakes you told me about in my e-mail! ^_^ |
| Ms. Imperfection 2002-08-08 ch 4, | abuseWow... just... wow! This story, to put it simply, is incredible! I was overjoyed to actually find words of SoD fanfiction, and am even *more* overjoyed to find a stunning piece like this. Bravo! I greatly envy your talent! I especially like the good feeling of closure I got from the epilogue. No matter what ending I got in the game, I still felt like there were just too many loose ends. Your epilogue left me with an 'Awwwwwh!' feeling. Especially since It wove in a trace of romance.. and the fact that I’m quite a bit more fond of Dana than Margarete. Petty reason, I know. But, anywho, this was SPECTACULAR. So much that it's caused me to ramble on excessively... I'll shut up now. Great work, hope to see more from you ^.^ |
| Angel-chan2 2002-08-07 ch 2, | abuseOoooooooooooooooooohhh!!!! Please continue this!! Am I the ONLY one who's reviewing this?! This is a good story! Good job! (and don't let the lack of reviews get to you; I STILL say this is very well done!) |
| Angel-chan2 2002-08-06 ch 1, | abuseWhoa... That's neat! Is there more? |