Love it! I was waiting for a fic starring Mr. Lunt, he's my favorite Veggie because he always has the most hilarious snarky lines. He is so in-character, and of course you had to put cheese curls in there somewhere.:) And your author's note at the end- I was hearing Archie's voice when I read it. Really cute fic!

Nice Job! Enough said.

Only Mr. Lunt could tell a story like that. There's something about the characterization of the characters that kind of throws me off.
Good use of grammar and details though, as well as creativity.

From, Comment person

P.S. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

This is a pretty cute story. This reminds of the Jonah outtakes where Mr. Lunt was telling that bizzare story about his aunt being a lobster.

I didn't know you didn't support Larry and Petunia...oh well, to each his own opinion.

Good job!

-iheartgod175