Hilarious. I liked how well you handled the transitions; they seemed very smooth to me, interacting between the story and the story-teller and audience perfectly.

Ha, I have the more than distinct impression that you'd just watched or read the Princess Bride before doing this chapter, lol.

Yay, Luriko-Ysabeth-sama's back! *does happy hamster dance* This story keeps getting better and better! That's why I was so sad when you didn't update for so long. *sniffle!* But now you updated, so Narrator's happy again! *reumes happy hamster dance*

Salute!
The Narrator

I'm very intrigued...I know the Princess Bride story, and some of the other things...but not much, but I do catch on pretty quick.
Update soon!

"What's Ellindarin?" Amelia asked.

"That's what elves speak," Lina and Gourry explained in unison.

"It's called that because they're the Ellindar," Gourry continued proudly.

"It means 'Star-singers' in their language," Lina clarified.

"They love stars," Gourry finished.

LOL! Oh, you crack me up! You're truly talented, please don't stop writing this! Begging you here!

This was SO FUNNY!
(and educational too - thank you amelia's mother)

This is my first time reviewing, but I read the stora regulary (sorry. ;) ). Just wanted to (finally) let you know it's great.

Man, that was long! The things you quoted were quite humorous (especially since so many were out of place), but I'm only familiar with...two? Time to check more stuff out. -_-;;

And gasp! You're including the Zoo in this? (All those people who only saw the movie have no idea what they're getting in to!) This just gets better and better!

It's rumored that Naga is Amelia's sister. That makes her family little more than dysfunctional. (Naga is Lina's big-boobed former partner who wears nothing but leather lingerie belonging to her mother and has a laugh more horrifing than Martina's)

Hi! I started to read your fic and I have to say I like it! I haven´t read the book, but I like the way you portray the characters! Also I liked the fluent writing.

Chapter five sure was a short one, but somehow it fits with the story...

I hope to read the next chapters. It feels so good when you find a fic that it's worth to read.
Sorry I can't say anything else except I enjoyed very much this fic.:D

Good luck!
See ya!

O, you are doing a pretty fair job of following the actual book, not just the movie. And I love how you are tying in all the interesting Slayers elements.
Damn, Amelia DOES have an interesting family...

Salute!
The Narrator

Ah! Too short! Although still extremely funny. I like your story alot and hope you will still continue it. When will they get to the fire swamp? (I love the Princess Bride)

Very funny hope you update soon

Very interesting. You've obviously watched the Princess bride or read th book. Please write more. I'm enjoying it! ^_^

Very interesting. You've obviously watched the Princess bride or read th book. Please write more. I'm enjoying it! ^_^

Very interesting. You've obviously watched the Princess bride or read th book. Please write more. I'm enjoying it! ^_^