I love the whole change and love for Clark/Superman! What will take place? I love the comment don't jump/fall out of any buildings because I might be saving a cat from a tree! LOVE IT! Your story is pretty cool.

This story seem nice,
Keep up the good work :)

this was absolutely brilliant, thank you for posting :D

oooh, Intreging. I loved the scene with Superman in the bull pen, especially how he told Lois off.

I am hoping that everything will be ok for Annie. I am looking forward to more of this.

Ergh! Remind me never to wish I had Supes' powers! I think you're handling the story very well, though.

Yikes! I hadn't expected the transformation to be quite this physically traumatic for Annie. I'm sure Clark will take good care of her, though. :-)

I was expecting Clark to show up and get Annie out of the newsroom, not Superman. Superman showing up just feeds the rumors. I guess Clark wouldn't have a good way to get her out of there quickly, though, and he'd have to find somewhere secluded to take her so he could change and fly north.

This was a very interesting chapter, but it was awesome nonetheless it also explained how she would get her powers.

I'm glad that you updated. I'm really enjoying the story. I like the way you have Clark act towards Annie. He seems to genuinely like her. She's such a stark contrast from Lois; I imagine after the debacle with her, he'd be looking for someone completely different.
I look forward to the next chapter! :-)

Update please this story is awesome.

I want to see Lois throw a messed up temper tantrum, cause superman isn't spending enough time with her.

When your giving your oc a super hero name. Make it your own unique name that matches her super hero attitude.

Awesome job!

Keep the kryptonite poisoning if it relates to the rest of the plot. Sooner or later, we need to find out what happened to her and why it doesn't seem to have affected Superman.

I like your portrayal of the Fortress. Very comic-booky, rather than the big empty crystal fortress from the movies.

One quick grammar comment: keep the narration all in past tense, and it will flow a little smoother.

You've piqued my interest. I like your new character, and I like this as a start to a story. You should run it through a spell checker and have someone check it over to make sure you've got commas where you need them, but other than that I like your writing style.