|Reviews for The Unsealed Vampire: Tsukune's Revenge|
| Ronniemac28 5/10/13 . chapter 7
Ok snow-bitch that bulls-eye on your back is gettin bigger by the day
| Ronniemac28 5/10/13 . chapter 6
hmmm...awwww... sweet relief. 11:08am 5/10/2013
| Ronniemac28 5/10/13 . chapter 5
oh hell yeah its picking up speed! 10:42am 5/10/2013 still trapped in front of my monitor for 6hrs now, my bodily urges are putting pressure on me to get up an find a restroom, i tried an quickly gave up on the option that required i move from this spot, i can see a 128 FL. OZ. apple juice container tucked in the corner by the computer desk well within arms reach. Hmmmmm...perhaps it can be the solution to my current situation?
| Ronniemac28 5/10/13 . chapter 4
holy crap its a resistance movement!, wait a sec oh no...i just realized ive been sitting here for 5hrs an told myself i would stop reading multiple times yet im still here... :/
| Ronniemac28 5/10/13 . chapter 3
something is not right here why cant i stop reading 10:03am 5/10/2013
| Ronniemac28 5/10/13 . chapter 2
i can help myself must read further...
| Ronniemac28 5/10/13 . chapter 1
omg im leaving this review just so i can favorite this story!
| Guest 2/26/13 . chapter 1
No, that doesn't make sense either. You should have called it "Tsukune's Revenge" and been done with it. Now it's falsely labeled as it is and will only disappoint those that will read this for Moka's revenge. Who SHOULD have cause for revenge her own self.
So those that look over a review section before reading. There is zero of Moka's revenge going on and is all Tsukune.
| That guy 2/25/13 . chapter 4
Nice batman the dark night rises in ch.4
| AGhostlyWriter 2/25/13 . chapter 1
Once again, I apologize for reviewing my own story to explain my stance:
The reason I decided to call it Moka's Revenge was because the whole plot really centers around her blood. The Ghoul created from her blood was the reason for all the destruction. Hence, indirectly making it Moka's Revenge.
Also, calling it Moka's Blood's Revenge just didn't sound right.
And I can guarantee that Moka will have more screen time in the next volume.
| Johnny 2/24/13 . chapter 20
Have to agree with the rest as to why the hell this was called Moka's revenge when she didn't do shit? Does that mean in the next one it's actually going to be Moka getting redemption? Could have been better by miles if Moka was something more than a side character and you didn't pull one over on us with that title. I'll be more aware next time that is if I decide to return.
| Alan6 2/24/13 . chapter 20
Interesting twist. I can't wait to see how you get him out of this one.
| Awesomenorwegian 2/24/13 . chapter 20
Ok... that was kind of an abrupt ending, but since there's another volume comming I guess I got no reason to complain. Here's a little advice before you contiune this story. Slow down. While this was not a bad attempt at continuing Lord of the Land of fire's story, it's not as good as it could have been, I'm just keeping it real here. When you start updating again, take your time. Read over the chapters before you post them, check the grammar and make sure you know where you're going. I don't really understand why you called this story arc "Moka's revenge", when Moka really didn't do a thing. Stories like this need to be well thought out before they're posted.
| UK-Underworld King 2/24/13 . chapter 20
Well, I have to say: this is a very interesting sequel to the original. The way you build up things until we reached this final moment goes perfectly along with the old, universal rule "actions, consequences".
I feel kinda sorry for Tsukune and wonder what about Moka? Will she ever know what he is going through? Thinking now, she hadn't much of an screen(page?)time on this.
Anyway, will wait for you sequel! Good work!
| TykkiMikk 2/24/13 . chapter 20
not much on Moka's revenge i think it was more like Tsukune's wrath or something if it was Moka's revenge it would have been more centered on Moka than...nevermind i think i got the point...um excellent work on this story hope to read the next volume very soon