|Reviews for Where Love Begins|
| TheRedHabanero 2/3/13 . chapter 3
Nice start to the story so far. Keep it up!
| Grimmwauld Von Gromovich Ilexa 1/30/13 . chapter 3
Very nice, although you shouldn't use commas to end sentences. I noted several points where you should have used exclamation points or question marks, but instead used a comma. Just think about how you would hear the sentence spoken, and use that to decide.