Heehee, this one made me ridiculously happy. Beyond what should have probably pleased me... I enjoy it oh so very much, thank you soo much for taking time out of your schedule to write/post this!

I love your fanfics! Callie is one of my favorite characters in the whole wide world and her relationship with Hiei is absolutely adorable. I love her awkward quirkiness and honestly can't wait for the next one shot.

Once again, you've done a great job, and again, I couldn't stop laughing. I realized I like your work because of how well you portray Callie. She honestly reminds me of myself back in my awkward stages of middle school and how bleak a time that was, which is a good thing though it brings up bad memories. You actually made me care about Callie and root for her success since I didn't get such a thing back then, and living through a character is what writing is about. I commend you on making me give a damn. Well done!

However, I would've liked to have seen this romance be a bit more drawn out. I thought the ending was a bit rushed, even for a short story, and the conclusion forced. It didn't flow like the rest of your work. My criticism mostly goes towards how you finally brought them together. Character wise, I do see Hiei merely deciding that they were in a relationship, but not at such a quick pace as you've done. In your story, I was expecting him to grow as a character, learn a lesson, and of course get the girl in the end. And because you've made me give a damn about Callie, I was actually hoping you wouldn't solve all of her problems with Hiei's involvement. I saw that the point of your story was to make Callie realize that she can actually stand on her own two feet and be able to essentially win at life. I was hoping to see more of a turn around for her as a person and have the relationship merely be the self confidence boost she needed to take charge and seize the day.

I hope I didn't bore you with me criticism, but I see your writing having a lot of potential, and I can hope you take my ramblings to heart to make yourself better. - Also, I can't WAIT to see what you have written next! I'm excited!

This was adorably cute! Though a bit cheezy, I loved what you did with your humor and an inventive use of the situation. Very slapstick. Overall, you made me laugh so hard, therefore I give you a nine out of ten. I hope to read more like this!

Ah! That was so cute! I loved it!

ROFLMFAO!

Kurama, the biggest cock block.

You have no idea how hard I squealed when I saw this alert in my inbox.

WOOHOO! I can't tell you how much I love your Yu Yu Hakusho fics. They make me die with happiness!

I agree, OOC-Hiei can be very fun XD And adorable! That bit at the end made me squeal XD

That was quite adorable. I loved it. I can't wait to see more work from you including the actual story line for Callie and Hiei. Keep up the good work!

Human!Hiei is adorable. Well done.

this story is really cute, I don't want to stop reading it. I cant wait for the next chapter

I love this so much! Thank you!

I would love to see this be made into it's on story. I'm sitting here just waiting to see what would happen next.

Kya! I love It i know your busy but keep

yay im so glad so see your work again. i love this idea that you are going to do with your series. also with this first installement of one shots it seems to me like there would be a sequel. is there going to be sequel? if not so far can there be i just love it to much for there not to be.

I LOOOOOOOOVEEEEEE YOOOOOUUUUUU! *jumps up and down* Oh how I have awaited your and Callie's return! Oh my oh my oh my what a great evening it is now that I have discovered your presence! Keep on keeping on you fantastic, amazing, stupendous and incredible author, you! Thank you so very much for writing! Really, you are a jaw-dropping author and I thank the anime/fanfic Gods for your existence.