Favorite line: But when she came to the bridge and he appeared, it was like the wrinkle – eyed smile all over again.

wow i love the title married to the FBI. happy 2013 up date soon :)

Excellent story background for Donnelly!

Good story about Donnelly. He is a dedicated man and deserved a little recognition. Good job.

Very plausible character study. Thanks for sharing.

I liked your story. It was nice to read donnelly's pov. I always thought that he was soft on joss. Even with joss and john handcuffed in the backseat, he's trying to figure a way, to soften the blow for joss. Donnelly has it bad. I guess he figures he still has a chance with joss. Since she didn't say that john was her lover, and she took no money from him. Hopefully you will continue. I liked the character of donnelly. Ok I won't say liked(past tense). Donnelly could still be alive. I couldn't stand snow then, still can't.

Nice bit of character study here.

Oh, poor Donnelly! This is just heartbreaking. BRB, crying forever.

Fantastic point of view!

Loved the insight into Donnelly's character! :)

Great job, loved it!