This is beyond awesome you depicted Inoichi, Shikaku, and Chouza just so perfectly!
Your style of writing is amazing as well, the story is short but very solid :)
I'm looking forward to your other story :)

Awesomnesss! Love love love. Inoichi d drama mama is always welcome!

Very nice. These three deserve all the love writer can give them.
I enjoyed the way you selected your 'snapshots' to come full circle.

oh my god K. this is pure freaking genius. i am absolutely in LOVE with this. the dads are so precious and lovely and inoichi's thoughts about shikaku not being that good looking to begin with? CLASSIC.

everything about this is just love. especially shikaku's 'philosophical' speech. SHIKAKU SHIPS KIBAINO, good man, GOOD MAN.

on my faves for life and beyond.