I think you need to slow down your chapters down with the he said, she said. It's all confusing with reading it all..

you know, you can delete the previous chapters on the doc b4 posting it. it's jus kinda a hassle to scroll down to the chapter. i hope i'm not being mean when i say that. i'm sorry if you feel i am.

Loved it. Please update soon.

Just saying, you don't need to repost every chapter as you post a new one. It's too repetitive so just post your new material. :)

Loved reading this, can't wait to read more!

Please continue... I would like to see where this goes