Hello!
Sorry for the late review. I was on vacation and stupidly forgot my iPad.

Callie was AMAZING. She is a badass with an awesome sense of humor! I loved when she climbed up the justice building!

Suede was sweet! (say that five times fast :P). I liked him and Kaiya. I did feel that his POV was a tad rushed compared to Callie's.

Great chapter! Can't wait for D9! Excuse me, I mean District Seven!

Not sure if I like Callie. Ipods and t-shirts in the Hunger Games world... 'Dunno.
Thanks for updating quickly, I'm really looking forward to reading District 7's reapings (:

I adore how you included some of the characters from the real series-I usually wonder what happened to them, so it's always great seeing them mentioned in a fanfic.

Poor Ren, though! I think I'm going to be cheering for her so far, simply because of her pregnancy. Two lives are at stake with one tribute..

Amazing work as always, and I cannot wait for more (:

the first fanfiction i've ever managed to read pass chapter 2, really love your writting style _

Wow Kira! Your writing is great :D I just read the whole thing and I love it, so far my favorites are Julia, Indigo and Relly :} I love how you portrayed Mila; sarcastic, insane, completely awesome! Phil was also quite cool too, he seems like an interesting character and I'd like to learn more about him.

YAY SERIAL KILLER! Mila is just awesome, her obsession with fear along with her justification that killing is natural are really cool, and I think she's gonna be one of those tributes who murders people horribly :) As for Phil, he's awesome too. His sarcasm is great as I love sarcastic tributes and I hope he makes it far in the games. Update soon!

It's nice to see some careers who arent as psychotic as the usual, Thetis was cool and I hope she makes it far, and I both love and hate Ash

Omg Relly is just amazing! Her reaction at the reapings was so sad! Maybe she and Callico could be allies? And Elliot was cool too, quite typical but I like that :)

Finally, I've got around to reveiwing this :) I love these two tributes! Julia is a complete psycho, and I adore Nero's pre-games killing! Damn the career pack is gonna be insane!

Yay! You updated!
Wow, Thetis was good! You portrayed her exactly how I wanted her to be- artistic, a dreamer, and of course, resentful that her dad is forcing her to do the games. I do wish we could have seen A bit more of Dylan so we can all see what a controlling jerk he is!
And I simultaneously felt urge to hug and slap Ash! He is so arrogant, it almost funny, but his arrogance also makes him likable. Kinda odd, but I love Ash. He is so cool :).

REEEEEEEEALLY GOOD JOB! can't wait for District five!

Keep writing!
-VG23

Woah! That's so cool. The first two chapters were...well...a glimpse of their Hunger Games. Hope to read the rest of it! Update whenever you can :)

This is awesome! Pleeeeeeease update soon!

Hello! I apologize for such a late review: loads of homework plus a broken laptop arent ideal situations for reading fanfiction :(. Anyway I LOVE how you portrayed Elliot! His love for obvious love for inventing and technology was shown perfectly! It broke my heart when he was lead up onto the stage with Marcia screaming for him. :( Good job!

And Relly was amazing too!I I enjoyed reading about Keelie, Elijah and Relly! Theyre such good friends! I also loved the Harry Potter reference! Who knew Panem had Harry potter!

Overall, REALLY GOOD JOB! There are justa few spelling errors here and there. I can't wait for D4! Go Thetis and Ash!

Overall, amazing

Oh my goodness I just want to give Elijah a huge hug for reading HP! Or you, for making him read HP. I loved the interactions between everyone, and Relly seems just as innocent as I imagined her. I like Elliot too, but I kept on getting him and Elijah mixed up cuz their names are so similar, haha :)

Awesome job and update soon!

IceTigers

Huh, I thought I already reviewed this chapter but I guess it didn't post it because I wasn't logged in. Oh, well.

Anyways, I love Relly. She's so incredibly innocent and naïve, just like I imagined. I also loved what you did with Elijah and Keelie, and their relationship was really well done. AND ELIJAH READS HARRY POTTER ILLEGALLY! *swoon* You made my day with that. Elijah is now my crush :p

Elliot was great, too, but of course, I am incredibly biased because Relly is like, my child, and I love her dearly. I'm interested in what he was wanting to build, though. And is Marcia his girlfriend or something?

You need to watch your grammar a little, especially with dialogue, but other than that your writing was pretty solid, so good job! :)

Update soon!

IceTigers