Great story, but just a suggestion:
don't put ''I thank God for all I have'', and ''God bless'' at the end of each A/N, I respectand admire your loyaltyto religion, but it's very off-putting. again, just a suggestion :-)

Intriguing plot twist with the alien whatever-it-is making 'em do that :)
Rory totally would act like that. XD That's awesome.

Hi! I like the idea of them being in Hollywood. It's rather nice.

O_O Am I really the only reviewer? That feels so weird...
Anyways, I like this new chapter! :) I wonder if anybody else liked or disliked Camille, and how that'll affect their relationship with the Doctor, Rory, and Amy... Hm...
Good job

XD I can't wait to see what they get cast as, if they get cast in something! :) Cool idea, I wanna read more!