Great stuff, more Lasky/Palmer chapters, please.

I loved it. :)

Another great chapter. Your writing and grasp of the Halo universe is truly awesome.

This guy deserves the support. He is a fantastic writer and a possible candidate for authorship of an official Halo novel. Favorite his stories if you haven't already. THAT MEANS YOU!
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This is so good! I'm so glad you posted it.

Oh my goddess. This is fantastic. Hurry and write more! I sincerely hope this will be a great story. No flaws and well written. Kudos!