I Grimm that you definirlo e ed to work on your writing skills , and your story is rally floppy and hard to infettando. Gli nerd tp take some an ingloba class before you even think about writing another story.

who the fuck this is u are a serious bitch
if u didn't like it get a life and don't read it jackass
this for a girl or a boy

No! Please don't! We love you! Okay now I'm crying!

If you really loved writing, this wouldn't be able to stop you from doing what you love..

Please post more i get it people can be cruel! You need to stay strong and keep writing! You are a great writer! Don't let anybody tell you otherwise! Hope you listen and keep writing! I love this story and all your stories please keep writing!

To the person who posted that comment wtf is your problem?! Like for real this is amazing story. Are you happy now?! She's crying now and she might not write any more I love her story and thanks to you I won't be able to know what happens next. You really need to get a life instead of bashing on peoples writing I'll like to see you try and write a fanfic as amazing as hers I bet you won't be able to. Please don't stop writing. Haters are always going to hate i'm sure millions of people love your story I do it's of my fav fanfics please don't stop writing

WTF who ever posted tjat shit is a bitch. Fuck man. Please continue this story. Me and alot of other please love your story. Dont stop it because of one jackass. Pleease continue. nealuvsu

Don't beat yourself up over some dumb loser who probably sucks at writing. Do you remember in hollywood heights when Loren was thinking about the reviews she got and if Eddie ever worries and eddie says "are you crazy I don't read my own press." If you believe in what you write don't let some idiot whom is probably jealous and honestly pathetic.. Don't let it get to you. You are talented and you spent a really long time writing this so PLZ don't give up and keep working harder. Screw whoever wrote that comment honestly.

Okay so I read what u said on chap24 and let me say this...whoever the bitch is that left the fuckking review needs to get a life becuz or stories are great and they make people believe that the impossible can happen and whoever said that probably has nothing netter to do but that was cruel becuz I love the way u set up the story and I believe what goes around comes around...so fuck he person who wrote the review do it for the people who you inspire when u add that extra chap becuz there are people out there that love the way you .

Crystal(your biggest supporter)

u cant let people bring you down the important thing is that you like ur stories and i like them

nooo I love your stories can u just write them and ignore the negative comments

That's really sad just know I will miss your stories for life...

Ashantimk

Don't listen to one person, you have so many people that really love your story. Remember that one episode on HH were Eddie was telling Loren that she had 16,000 hits to her song and then she said she had some negative responses as well. Well she had 4 negative ones and 15,996 positive ones. You have too many people that love your story, don't let one or even too stop you! There are always negatives in life but there are also so many positives. You can't let them get you down.

U r letting them get to u
1. U r an talented writer
2.a lot of people love ur writing
3. PEOPLE WHO SAY DUMB SHIT CAN FUCK OFF! THEY R JERKS THAY DONT APPERICIATE THE FACT THAT U PUT UR WORK INTO U WRITING. DONT EVER EVER GIVE UP. U BETTER LISTEN TO THE PEOPLE WHO LOVE UR STORIES THEN THE JACKASSES WHO TALK SHIT. HALF OF THE HATERS PROB DONT HAVE A STORY

please continue i love your stories ... just forget about a few negitive coments ... just like eddie duran and loren tate did when they launched their new songs for their new albums ... just believe in yourself !