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ChIbIaNgElChAn12
2009-10-05 . chapter 5
This Story rocks! I especially like the cute sibling Carrot/Marron scenes! ^ ^ Please continue soon! ^ ^
LeBibish
2007-10-04 . chapter 4
Just letting you know that this is still one of the most awesome things ever and if you ever feel like finishing it there are people eager to read it.
ashez2ashes
2005-02-09 . chapter 4
*sigh* Why have all of the good fanfics not been updated since 2002? Well, for what its worth, I liked this. I was pretty into it too, despite trying not to get too into it after checking the update date. If for some reason you ever decide to dreg this out of fanfic limbo I'd be very interested in reading it. The idea was great, and everyone's in character. *sigh* it's too bad you never continued it...
escudo-blade
2004-07-27 . chapter 1
Update soon
Unseen Watcher
2003-09-09 . chapter 4
I like this one. Could you continue/end it? Hopefully semi-happily? Onegai?
Sarryn
2002-12-02 . chapter 4
Incredibly good. I am in awe.
Creamer
2002-12-02 . chapter 3
Excellent story so far. I love the way Carrot is characterized. He is still the funny hentai we all know and love while showing glipmses of depth he posesses. Can't wait for the next update.

P.S. Howzabout some Milphey/Carrot action since he's bi now, eh?
Katie
2002-09-25 . chapter 3
This is really good!!! I like how Carrot is so carefree about dying. The reactions he gets from everyone else are too good! I am looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Skyrocket
2002-09-20 . chapter 3
This is a pretty good start. The base idea is interesting, everyone is in character and there's been some truely funny moments. I think there could be a bit for description, but other than that this is a good story.
Sarryn
2002-09-09 . chapter 3
Great story. Can't wait for more. Can't think of any more compliments. Too tired. Look at all those periods. Okay, now I'm finished.
Sorcerer Huntress
2002-09-09 . chapter 3
Hee hee...... That was great! ^_^ Me love this story!! I'm confused, but it's so kewl!!!!!!!
Sarryn
2002-08-30 . chapter 2
I liked this chapter a lot.
Sorcerer Huntress
2002-08-29 . chapter 2
ooooooh that was good!!! I'm still confused... "damity damn damn..." that was a funny line!! ^_^ I like the TiraxCarrot semi-romance here.... Carrot feeding Tira... aaaaw... *sqee* KAWAII!!! ^_^

And then I said, "It's still soaking in the dress from yesterday"
~*^*~Sorcerer Huntress (Cafe Latte)
Manx
2002-08-29 . chapter 2
Finally Carrot has started to show his comrades some kind of appreciation :). I NEVER thought that he would prioritize them before the concept of having sex. Also, I hope that he'll get a little 'closer' to the Misu sisters as well...
teno-hikari
2002-08-28 . chapter 2
:: Mouth hangs wide open :: Carrot's hitting on Millie! That sure was a shocker, and I'm glad Carrot is a lot more open minded now. "I wanna go chase girls AND boys!" hehe. Still, the end of the chapter has me a little confused and eager to read the next.
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