I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter. You've really succeeded yourself with this chapter, i feel really sorry for Isabella with the stuff she's gone through. I commend you with how you've managed to write such a sad chapter

Isabella! Isabella! Oh God I can't believe it! Oh wow that is not who I thought Ooo this gonna be interesting...

I think your writing is one of the better authors in Robin Hood fiction. Keep up the good work.

nice keep going

I'm really impressed that you've managed to show the side of Robin which can only be described as giving up and depressed. I really enjoyed reading this chapter, I wonder what will happen in the next chapter? Will the merry men come to his rescue? Who knows? Looking forward :)

I like your sequel more than the original!
Exciting and scary!

good update

Ooh You make Vaisey absouletly perfect. I love it!

I really enjoyed this chapter, it shows how emotional Marian can get when she has other things on her mind. Great chapter, you've shown that you can make a character be emotional yet not breakdown under the pain. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

She's coming home! I do hope she gets back in time to revive Robin, now! Damn the Holy Lands for being so far away O.o But yeah, another great chapter and I can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing with us!

Wow! I did not see that coming! So, Marian is alive; Robin's got himself arrested after losing the will to live, Much has gone storming in there after him, and now this! Awesome chapter and an increasingly gripping plot. I sincerely hope she gets back to Sherwood in time to help Robin; they're man and wife, now. :O Anyway, as you can guess, I think this is so good! Writing, characterisation, plot and pace: all well done. Thanks again for sharing this with us :)

Oh, I'm looking forward to seeing whether Eva becomes a central character in the story! But trust Much to go riding into hell to protect his Master. Sigh. I already mentioned how I loved his character in the show, and it's awesome you're using here blah, blah. I don't want to repeat myself, but seriously, it's great to see him getting an hour in the fanfic limelight! Yay!

Again, your writing is great, the story moves along so smoothly and everyone in character. I continue to look forward to the next chapter. Well done. :)

Great start! The writing is really good; nicely detailed and moving along at a great pace. Everyone is nicely in character, too. Much is my favourite of all the Outlaw gang, he gets such a flipping raw deal from them! So, great to see him included here, and as a key character. Thanks for sharing this with us :)

good story i like it

YAY Marian and Carter are alive cannot wait for chapter 5 you were right it is short but it is well deserving of a revoew