| Reviews for A Living Nightmare! |
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Spot an Appaloosa 6/11/13 . chapter 14Ok so I'm a little late again... sorry for that, just don't seem to find the time to catch up on everything here on ff... Anyway... LOVED this chapter. And OMG I seriously thought that Jack died :'( The part where Kim is back in school was very written with so much emotion, but also a lot of information about how her life looks like. And you really kept us on edge the whole time, not letting us know if Jack was dead or not. Brilliant! I was so happy when I found out that Jack was still alive and that he'd awaken from his coma. But OH NO he lost his memory :O There was another little thing that I noticed also; when Kim and Alex are visiting Jack the first time, Alex explains thatJack can hear them even though he's ina coma. A little later Kim says she loves him. He has to remember that! Can't wait for the next chapter. I NEED TO KNOW what's gonna happen. I actually thought that this story would soon end since they got away from Christian and all, but now with Jack's memory gone and with Christian still on the loose I can see that there's still more to this story, which is great:) I really love it:) /MJ xxx |
Hgirl loves you 6/10/13 . chapter 14Its really hard to review on a phone but im trying anyway sorry I havent reviewed lately but ive been reading the chapters though AWESOME JOB SERIOUSLY THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! :) :D wven though im sure you will. |
Guest 6/3/13 . chapter 14 Wow ur story is REALLY good hope u can update sooon cant wait to see what happens bext xx maybe seeing kim in danger might bring jacks memory back? Just an idea but hey its ur story :) |
tinypoomps 6/3/13 . chapter 14CCCHHHAAARRRLLLIIIEEE! STOP DOING THAT! Me hate cliffhangers! Anyway I love this chapter, I was like on the verge of crying when they did that thing... the revival technique or whatever to Jack in my mind I was like "NOO HE CANT DIE YET!" Haha thank you for keeping him alive but with amnesia?! Seriously! Ah well builds more suspence. Please update asap! I'm waiting impatiently! Lol ) |
KarateGirl77 6/3/13 . chapter 14omg awesome chapter ! |
DarkHeartRocker13 6/3/13 . chapter 14Oh my god he doesn't remember Kim. I am totally crying right now.:( |
Guest 6/3/13 . chapter 14 OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! DDUUUUDDDEE! UR AN AWESOME WRITER! |
BurkelyDuffieldLover 6/2/13 . chapter 14Oh. My. Kick, Jack lost his memory! What a twist I did not see that coming. He doesn't remember Kim... But them, what about Kick? |
Kickinitlover01 6/2/13 . chapter 14Omg he lost his memory! NOOOOOOOOOO! Lol more plz:-):-) |
ADayWithNoLaughterIsADayWasted 6/2/13 . chapter 14OMG noooo he has to remember! |
AnMaRo412 6/2/13 . chapter 14This is so sad but so good! It is so well written! I hope you update soon! :) |
Randomgirl111111 6/2/13 . chapter 14Nice twist! I love this story and cannot wait for more;) |
swagmasterlol 6/2/13 . chapter 14NO NO NO NO NO! WHY NO NO NO! omg, why are you so evil?! TT update! I need jack to remember Kim.. _swagmasterlol |
AusllyXKickXR5 6/2/13 . chapter 14THATS SO SAD! HE FORGOT HER! :*( |
Wipe your eyes 6/2/13 . chapter 14Update Soon!:D |