love it

I loved your characterisation of Snape in this piece, very good.

Loved it! Snape is very much in character. I could just picture him, scowling and humiliated. That's one kiss he'll remember.

damn...you're harsh. and good. hurry up with falling I! :)

one of my favorite and least favorite fanfictions. its so /good/ but sad.
love it.

Very well done, I really enjoyed the way you portrayed a teenage Snape. And since I'm a huge supporter of the Snape-so-was-in-love-with-Lily theory, I enjoyed it even more. All in all, great job!

Ah! Okay, I have to know-what's your object in this? To show his awful past, how his first kiss had been a fake, and you merely picked Lily to administer it as the easiest, most convenient person to do it, or did you mean something deeper by picking her? I can sort of suspect that since you went on and said how he had had a crush on her, how much he enjoyed it... AHH! Tell me it was something more! Tell me she did, actually-at least, she was surprised because it wasn't as terrible as she had thought. Please!
A crazed Lily and Severus fanatic,
-Lavinia Lavender

Damn. That was perfect. Not a single word was too much or not enough. It flowed beautifully, nothing dragged and nothing was overdone. Perfect.

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i LOVED your fic... hope you'll do more in hte future... i like the way you write... keep it up!

Oh, *gosh*, that was simply... heartbreaking. Poor, poor Severus. At first it was simply a good fic, a well-written insight into this complicated character, but then suddenly my nose is all red and I bloody need a Kleenex. It's just... sad, that's all. Deeply, truly sad.

Aaawwww, that hurt - *sniff* - beautifully!
Poor Severus, what a cruel thing to do to him...
Excellently written, with powerful, vivid imagery and evoking strong emotions!

That was nothing short of beautiful. A very sad story for a first kiss; one so fitting for poor sad little Sevvie. He has many memories to be bitter about and this is just perfect.
I like your style and the story is, like I already said, more than believable. I'd love to read a sequel to this.
Bye bye, Suni.

Wow, this is really good. Are you going to expand it into a longer story? Keep up the good work.

Goddess of Camelot

Awww! This was too sad! It was great! But still very sad. Severus didn't deserve to have something like that happen to him, no matter how mean he is sometimes.

Aww, I loved this. I mean loved this. It may have been short, but you captured Snape perfectly (are you sure you aren't hiding him? lol)But it was sad cause he was laughed at... And that's a pretty depressing first kiss.
In a way it was darkly funny though...
xox