Nice two chapters

"When Ryo-Ohki and Ryu-Oh crashed here centuries ago" Shouldn't that be Funaho?

Sweet story, keep it coming for I can not wait for the rest. I can not wait to see how the others that have not yet ended come out as well.

I see you still have that problem with cloaked figures. I'll assume they went and picked up Sasami next so that she could help contain Mihoshi without revealing who was under the Cloak and Veil. But one question: Who is this Masaki who got Mihoshi's picture with Tenchi?

Interesting. I like this look at the events that took place right before and durring the start of It's a Pirate's Life for me story that you wrote. I take it that you are tring to get your thoughts in order before continuing your other works.

Splendid. Oh awesome.