|Reviews for The Expedition|
| Flint009 3/30/13 . chapter 1
I just had to drop by and often you some insight to why you aren't receiving the reviews by all rights should be getting. Reason being is because your grammar's excellent, enough said. Although some of your characters aren't in character such as Naruto, but other than that it's pretty good. The reason why no one really wants to read this story is because there's too many fucking characters. Seriously, there's no need for Natsu-bitch to be in it, or Aang. And the power levels are all messed up.
I would suggest cancelling this story and just rewriting it as a strictly Dragon ball z/Naruto crossover. With all these characters you have it's just one big mess. Demons and hollows in the same world, it's too much.
And if the Kyuubi was so fucking powerful don't you think the Z warriors would've sensed its attack? The Naruto characters are weak. They're not as powerful as you're trying to portray them to be. They are not. That's fact.
| Mystic 6 tailed Naruto 1/27/13 . chapter 1
Awesome new start bro! I still look forward to when Goku and Tsunade do 'it' and have some children!