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Likes: TWINKIES AND DONUTS AND COOKIES AND ICECREAM AND EVERYTHING THAT INCLUDES UNICORNS AND RAINBOWS AND DEATH-and hold that thought...

Thx for including me! Oh..here's the form:

Weapon(s): MEH AWESOME KNIFE
Crush: Nome (for now)
Dislikes: Haters of twinkies, donuts, and cookies 3

In case you need it ;p

Galbelmz(Random mouse)

Wepon(s): Zangetsu, Heavy Metal Blast

Crush: Lolz, nil

Likes: Pissing trollers off

Dislikes: Being a sappy hero

The first paragraph is relatively all right expect for a few mistakes (as of all, just try to aim for accuracy). The second is not bad. The third was slightly humorous and I sincerely wished he would freak his head off. The last few sentence I was "..." at the awkwardness of the situation. Short, sweet, impactful. Overall, great job, and keep going.

So...starting a story soon? You better be, cause this TFM archive is dying.
Transformice Name: Galbelmz

Appearance: White cap, black-and-white earphones, zangetsu (sword), neon-blue glasses, orange tie, light brown fur

Title: Shaman Champion (You can put anything)

Personality: Techie & shuffle, doesn't really mind when called anything, likes to laugh off things,can be critical/cynical/sarcastic (or all at once)
Other: Have a lightning scar behind the glasses (TFM doesn't allow this, huh?)

Transformice Name: Iluvfudge
Appearance: tiger striped fur, rainbow dash hair, black headphones, and a knife
Title: A Mouse on Strike
Personality: Funny, makes random comments at times, dramatic
Other: (none)