This isn't that bad, it should be a little more detailed... But it was a good.

Nice. Please do more. There aren't many Lux fan-fictions.

Very well written. Short, sweet and to the point.

I admit I had to stop and think who Ethan was for a second before I remembered lol. But upon remembering I have to wonder if he wouldn't have refered to Dee by her first name rather than the more formal Ms. Black?

That was sooo much better than how I pictured it in my head! It's now officially my favourite lux fanfiction! :D