|Reviews for Bastille|
| FClydEN 5/11/13 . chapter 5
OH MY! I CAN'T THINK ANYMORE... Im evolving into a Cheshire cat now :D lol
| FClydEN 5/11/13 . chapter 4
The friendship of Nookie and how she's willing to put herself in the line for others. The very revolutionary character of Noemi there. Nice touch.
Oh! Look it's Jenna then Rob so its means hihi
and I really LOVE this chapter, here's why...
"...She ran to him and proceeded to wipe the grime off his face with the edge of her apron. Though she couldn't hear what the woman was saying, Noemi was fairly sure she was reproaching her husband. Lovingly, she thought, judging by the look on her face and the slow, smile curling the corners of the man's mouth. Her features softened; it must be wonderful, she mused, to have someone love you like that."
[in her hard exterior of course there still this childlike N inside of her]
"...M'sieur, forgive this wretched creature, but I need to know, for the sake of my sanity and for the well-being of the concerned, whether or not I've played a role in destroying another human's life because of our cause. I feel the blood of my friends dripping down my fingertips, even as we speak. I hold myself accountable for their fate."
She folded in on herself, and tears sprang to her eyes. "Have I ruined her, too?"
[Oh the goodness! the vulnerability of Noemi for the unavoidable casualty :" hihi]
"Does it still hurt, from that day?" she asked softly, eyes sad. The girl's eyes widened in shock.
"Noemi?" [of course the meet up! again wee]
and most especially from Jeanneau,
"Madness, Noemi! Madness!"
-right Jeanneau, the Madness!
Grinning like the cheshire cat :D
| FClydEN 5/11/13 . chapter 3
gosh the intensity, you are making me speechless.
| FClydEN 5/11/13 . chapter 2
Noemi/Naomi' speech it feels. and I been thinking "unavoidable casualties" Emily? well lol
| FClydEN 5/11/13 . chapter 1
finally my lapytopy is back! Hope yours too so you can update and help us in our misery [or just me]. ok lets get this reviews started,
What can I say? French Revolution.. History... to be honest I don't remember any lessons from our World Lit when I was in High School but still that is not necessary lol.
I would like to leave my guess who's who in here but that will be unfair because i already read the next chapters haha and its quite obvious. wee!
| Guest 3/23/13 . chapter 5
More, please, more! It's been way too long since your updated this and I've really enjoyed reading it so far!
btw, how are things going with your professor? ;)
| R3dN0te 2/24/13 . chapter 5
Haha. What a flirt noemi is.
Imperial Russia-themed Skins sounds hard.
| jaxicen 2/24/13 . chapter 5
Sorry! Was really busy all week and couldnt read as I need to make some time for this; it's a good thing though. Glad I could read two chapters instead! The last one was great, I really like the way you portrayed Jenna and the whole description of the underground cellar. The naomily fluff here was awesome, it made me really happy! I'll need some help in differentiating the pronunciation of Amelie and Amielle though. Cheers!
| marsupial1974 2/24/13 . chapter 5
Yes, I total am shipping you and the English prof! ( insert an eye roll here!) ha ha! Just call me a hopeless romantic;)
Ya know, I am in the middle of playing Assassins Creed 3 right now, and I so feel that they should have set it during the French Revolution instead of the American Revolution! I'm just saying!
I loved the Naomily interaction in this chapter, it was cute. But I get the feeling that something bad is going to happen here. I can't put my finger on it, but I just get that feeling, ya know? It's not going to be easy for our girls is it?
Anyway, great chapter:) and keep an eye out , I may just be writing a fanfic about you and the teacher;) ha ha!
| marsupial1974 2/23/13 . chapter 4
Yay! Emily! Very nice work! It's starting to get very exciting;) I can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh, and yes. If you have graduated and she is no longer your teacher, ask away;) It doesn't mean she'll say yes, but it doesn't mean she'll say no either! it never hurts to try:)
Until next time:)
| Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 4
Great chapter! can't wait for the next one! :)
| Guest 2/19/13 . chapter 4
phantastic! again, i can only congratulate you to your brilliance. in my opinion this story is by far the most creative and catching one on here at the moment! keep up the good work, especially now that we have been introduced to emily, and thank you :)
| Guest 2/19/13 . chapter 4
can't wait for more! One of the few well-written stories nowadays, please do go on! More naomily! yaaay!
| ScabbedKneesandRippedJeans 2/19/13 . chapter 4
I literally can't wait to see how time travel fits into all of this. And you write flawlessly, as well.
| MardyBumAtBakery 2/19/13 . chapter 4
Yes! Emily finaly makes an appearence :)
While reading this i couldnt help thinking of les miserables. I was like waiting for naomi to start singing A heart full of love when she saw emily.
Love this sory so far keep going!