Ah I rather enjoyed this story! It's very interpretive, but you did a good job of that. Creative - I like it. :) And I found the style you used to be quite easy and pleasurable to read. Thank you for a well written tale!

That was beautiful... )':

Beautifully written XD
Just if Chizuru remembered Chikage, then she wouldn't have joined Shinsengumi and considered him as the enemy D: Awww how I want them to have a happy ending!
Actually I don't like how they got Chizuru ended up with Hijikata in the anime . Kazama Chikage would fit better as her spouse XD
Thanks for writing this wonderful angsty piece! Loved it!

This was so beautifully written. Can I ask for more? XD

Salut comme tu peux le voir, je suis française ! J'ai lu ta fiction et j'avoue avoir beaucoup aimé mais c'est dommage qu'elle soit si courte ! J'aurai au moins amié voir une rencontre "dans le présent" avec Kazama !

Voilà c'est pour te dire de continuer d'écrire, j'ai bien aimé !

Bye !