|Reviews for A Promise|
| Naarastiikeri 1/30/13 . chapter 1
Great. Just great. You've successfully torn my sensitive heart apart .
Just kidding xD At least partly. You truly just made me cry, but I can't say I'm angry or anything about it. This whole story is just too cute in a way and at the same time so depressing. I cannot say anything but well done, while wiping away the last tear... Still, there are two small things, which somehow bothered me even though it's no big deal (on both of them). First of all the thing, that Miles calls Nick "Wright". They are just children and besides that they're best friends, aren't they? So I'd think it would be more appropriate, if he called him "Nick" or at least "Phoenix".
Second, the "Fin." at the end kind of ruined the mood :/ It is still sad, without any question, but I think it would have been better without it.
Nevertheless it is (as I already said) a very good and especially touching story and therefore I like it very much :)
| GeorgiexxxSuarez-JFT96 1/29/13 . chapter 1
Well now I'm crying! This was really good. I loved it. You should write more stuff like this.
| Feyfangirl 1/29/13 . chapter 1
Brilliant. heartbreaking, but brilliant :) xx