Holy tense, Batman! I hope Maeve can figure out her powers so nobody dies!
-MOTH

WOW, just wow... 8)

Ohhh buddy! This chapter was crazy interesting! I love the ending, esp. w/ Maeve finally being able to use her powers! :D Wahoo! So can't wait for hte next chappie!

I LOVE ur story but plzzzzzzzz update as soon as u can ! No pressure ;)
Byyyyyyeee! Lots of luv 3

I really liked this chapter, but I think that Jack and Maeve might have said "I love you." just a little too quickly.
-MOTH

I just... I can't... DAHHHHHH THE FEELS! XD Idk if I can honestly contain myself! This chapter was the bestest of all! I just might go reread it ;D

Ohh why does Mother Nature have to be so difficult!? I really hope they figure out how to stop teh rebirth thing before she gets changed! Bc then she'll be a baby all over again and Jack won't be able to find her, and then she won't even remember anything when he does! 8( And they still have to change the Guardians back into adults... And stop Pitch... Oy, this is getting heavy...

But Jack and Maeve's little fight was super awesome and then BOOM! Finally the love birds give a little smooch! Hehe! And we finally understand the Winter Roses :} So happy... *sniff*

Good luck on your final exams! Cna't wait to find out what happens next :D

Awesome chapter.

Mother Nature should totally try to kill Jack to make Maeve obey her. :O

Jack could be laying limp on the ground in a puddle of blood and there could be comparisons with blood and snow... Maeve goes crazy, unlocks some kickas* power and chases her Mother away, then tries to save Jack... :O

OMG can picture it! :) Regardless of my suggestion, I am sure the story will be brilliant and a great read!

Keep up the awesome!
Yuurei no Chu

Btw, I hate you. JUST WHEN THINGS GET GOOD... eh, guess its still good for the fan girls.

Grrrrrrrrrrrrr you just had to do that, didn't you? :/ But his lil speech was so cute! :D

So did Pitch takeover Jack's body? 8( Ahh this could be really bad... I hope Jack doesn't hurt her/them too badly... :(

Well good luck w/ exams! :) Hope you do well!

I really liked this chapter, I hope you update soon.
-MOTH

I don't really know what to say about this chapter, I liked it, I guess it just kind of left me stunned that Bunny was so mean to Maeve.
-MOTH

WRITE FASTER

Wha? The fluff was cute! That's what I like about it, it's not like they just met and suddenly they're head over heels for each other. It's fluid, natural, like normal life. That makes it more believable, not corny, and worth reading.

And I liked the ending! Short chapters are needed sometimes just to fill up time and gaps before the big stuff starts happening. No worries from my p.o.v.! :)

Once again great job! I like how you've got the continuity w/ Jack and Bunny fighting, especially for Bunny's attitude. He would be exactly like that! And I loved the part where Jack chased her into the woods and he couldn't find her at first, but the wind could carry her voice so they could still talk. Brilliant! Oh, and great job w/ her emotions; I can tell that you're not just putting a few paragraphs of thought into how she's suddenly a guardian and she's all good w/ it. She's emotional about it and doesn't know if she can handle it, but Jack is there to support her. Supporting emotion and drama makes a story! Keep it up!

Oh and a baby Toothie :} How cut- uhh awful! Totes aweful :( [ :) ] haha

Wow, this is possibly the longest review from me! I hope this makes you feel more special! :D Can't wait to find out what happens next; it's probably going to get intense here soon. Happy writing! :)

Awww :( Now she feels lonely... and sad... I don't blame her though. That wouldn't exactly be easy.

So she still looks the same but in her reflection she saw herself as blonde? Just makin sure I'm on the same page :)

Aww not Tooth too! 8( *sniff* They all gon' be babies! I was scared Jack was going to be turned to one for a second there haha

Hmm so I wonder how they're going to react to Maeve being Pitches granddaughter? I'm sure they'll just be a comfort to her; not exactly something to be proud of. :/ But I wonder, was Mother Nature herself ever bad? Or she was always good and she obviously left Pitch bc she wants nothing to do w/ him, which is why she obviously hid Maeve? Also, does Mother Nature have a dual personality at all? She's obviously good, but does she have a bad side, being Pitch's daughter? But we all have our flaws and are bad sometimes, so I guess it'd make sense if she did.

But fluff next chapter?! Wahooo! Can't wait til Monday! Summer is officially here for me, so I get all the time to read ever! :D Huzzah! *happy dance* Can't wait til you update more!

I really liked this chapter! Update soon!
-MOTH