Reviews for Fire in the Sky Episode Addition: How Things Burn

Reviews For: Fire in the Sky Episode Addition: How Things Burn

Mad as Hell 2005-02-07 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely LOVED it :) well done ! Those two are so right for each other :)
DevilsTrill 2002-10-01 ch 1,	abuseOh. So beautiful. I just watched the episode and I was thinking there could be something behind the song she sang. I liked your view on her past. Makes loads of sense. You touched on the reason I love these two so much. He protects her and she allows it, even if she wouldn't admit it outloud. Keep up the good work! ^_^
Lady Elizabeth 2002-08-20 ch 1,	abuseVery good story though you should detail it a little more. The plot is okay though I wish to see more of it developed. But overall it was a pretty good story.
Ryalin 2002-08-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseAs usual Jaclyn, another winner. -Ry
CrimsonCat 2002-08-08 ch 1,	abuseGleep! I can't believe I didn't review this yet. I read it, just didn't review. A bad habit I'm developing that needs to be nipped in the bud. In the bud I say! lol, but the fic... Awwwwwwww, Jaclyn! I downloaded the song after seeing that ep. too, although it took me awhile to find it. Oh, this was so sad, but so sweet. And I loved the past you created for Marguerite. Yes, that sounds like something she'd do. lol! I just can't put into words how much I loved this. damnit, you always do that to me lol. I'll add an extra 'awwww', and hope it gets my point across. ;) Loving these new LW fics you're making. And, can't wait until you post some more. Oh, but don't forget about the poetry. Looking forward to that too. :) :) Dai stiho ~CrimsonCat~
Evil Irish Eyes 2002-08-08 ch 1,	abuseWell-Well . . . Look who's back . .. . Nice to hear from you, And so well I have to say, this story was truely wonderful. I loved it, Really I like the emotion you put in it and the slight sudden turns that kept us from predicting what was to happen next. I also enjoyed the little bit about her first 'divorce'. hehe . . Truely genius Well it's great to see you up and posting again, Thanks so much for this story, This Me signing out
nefret24 2002-08-06 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was terrific!! Highly impressed at your ability to work that ending- always thought there should have been more to that!!! The lyrics are a wonderful catch- so appropriate and telling. The last line is going down in my book of absolute favs- "such a tragedy how these things burn." :) Brava!!!
The Inner Genie 2002-08-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseJaclyn, I really enjoyed this story! Loved your descriptions, too. Roxton is such a sweetie. Great job!
lonaj 2002-08-06 ch 1,	abuseAnother great story, Jaclyn. So glad to see a new one from you! That muse seems to be back in business again. Particularly like how you wove in your ideas with series history, your dialog and your small descriptions of emotion and character reaction. For example "Shocked and anguished by the bitterness and hurt in her voice, Roxton took a step back....and promptly crashed into the wall behind him. " Just wonderful. You brought me into the Treehouse and I watched the story unfold.
Steffi 2002-08-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseAwwwww Jaclyn !!! How do you do that ? Always to write such emotional , wonderful, romantic and just great fics ?? :D:D First didn´t I just ask you yesterday if you would write another fic ...aww and now you really posted one !! HUGS Really needed that after yesterday ! ;) So still have the Bird song in your head ? :D Thanks for posting the Lyrics and even a Link with the Midi ..always wanted to know that !! :D Hugs Now to the story : Awww I just loved it what Roxton said to Marguerite ..that he trusted her ..so beautifully written !! "John," Marguerite choked out, and for one crazy moment Roxton thought someone must be strangling her in the dark." ---> ROFL !!! or "her head felt too heavy on her neck, like it would just snap off and roll away...." ---> ROFL !! Even in such a story with so many emotions you always have to hide such rofl parts !! :D:D:D Loved that !! :D Awww and then Marguerite tells him about her first marriage !! Sooo sweet ! Of course she can trust him ! :D And a Kiss ...the whole story I waited for a kiss and then almost at the end ...boooom ...a kiss ! :D:D Thanks for adding that !! Hugs What can I say ..you make me writing long reviews again with such wonderful fics !!:p Please write more !! :D Just love the way you write ..and always M&R ..awwwww :D Hugs Hugs Hugs Steffi :)
Tessa 2002-08-06 ch 1,	abuseJaclyn, wonderful story. It had me near tears when I read it. I think there could be a sequel to it :D ;).
Lady Primrose Roxton 2002-08-05 ch 1,	abuseNicely done! A great set-up to the later revelations by Roxton and Marguerite. I like the way that you built up, then just had Marguerite just collapse with her anguish. The picture was very clear and I felt Roxton's pain. Good mood piece. Thank you! Lady P

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