Really good job on this. You have a stellar way of writing Jack, and the comparisons of Carly to Mikage and Sherry were a nice touch.

This one shot is amazing!

There's so many things I want to say about this story but I can't find the right words to describe it. I mean, I did enjoy reading it. So Jack is trying to find his own perfect girl even if she isn't perfect like the way he wants her to be. I especially enjoying the last part and somehow it reminds me of another story that I'm currently reading.

I really am lost at words but I enjoyed it. :)

Interesting, I love the way the characters all have there own uniqueness, I guess.
Also I was wondering when was the last time you updated some stories, but writing more great one-shots like this is still a good way to go. I mean your really good at writing
(not trying to be rude or anything, I was just wondering)

Ah I like it. Jack really realizes what is important in a relationship.

I really admire your writing. It's always so elegant and beautiful, and I really loved how you compared Mikage and Sherry to Carly. It surprised me that you didn't bring up Akiza, though. She seems like another example of a curvaceous, talented duelist that would stereotypically capture the attention of the male lead. You very rarely write about or mention Aki at all, actually - which is fine, since so few people really write about Carly.

You always characterize Jack so well. His stubbornness really comes across. The first scene in particular is amazing; "The audience loves it. They erupt with laughter and cheers. Jack smiles. He is pleased to have figured that out," is a stellar line.

Wow, fantastic, I loved it, you make a great job and I like how you write.
Jack and Carly make a perfect couple, they are a little opposites but they complement each other, and sometimes perfect people aren't the best option, maybe being perfect makes you a little imperfect.
I really enjoyed read this.

I'm not good with english, I speak spanish so maybe there are some mistakes in this review.

I really loved this. Your Jack really is very good. You make him seem capable of being "romantic" (in his weird way) without making him ooc, something I think for this character in particular can be a bit challenging.
I also really enjoyed Jack's inner monologues about all of the women. The way you describe his own crazy attachment to Carly in comparison to the others was adorable.
Nicely Done!