This is a heart wrenching story, will she, won't she? Will they survive her decision to abort this fœtus? This is what got to me:

"She lifts her other hand to her stomach and glides it under her shirt. The skin there is smooth and flat. She hadn't started to show yet.

His grip tightens."

It's killing me, will they go through with it?

Please, please, update soon!

Favorite lines:
They had both felt so alive.

This escape from death has awakened something in him. He wanted that child. He wants her more.

"You're not in this alone."

His words echo into the space. This is consistent. This is his truth, her truth. Their truth.

Real talent and rare discipline to say so much in a few well chosen words - thank you for this.

So bittersweet!

This is a wonderful story full of conflict, passion, redemption, and love well written.

Lovely!

This is a thoughtful take on the possibility.

Wow! This was heart wrenching, but very well done. You did a fantastic job capturing the angst of their predicament. Please continue!

Nice fic!

This was sweet and heart wrenching at the same time. that's hard to do and you did a excellent job.

Sooo sad:( Is there a chapter 2? I hope she doesn't go through it

Melancholy is how I feel after reading this. What a heart wrenching story. You did an excellent job and I really enjoyed it.

Come on joss, have his baby please

J & J together and baby makes three. Wow, this would be an interesting pregnancy.

Oh, this really works well as a double snapshot of them. Very powerful, spare, and true to their characters. Also heart-rending. More please.