i like the fic so far at first i was afraid u were gonna bash one of the characters yuffie or tifa wasn't sure which. glad it doesn't look like u'r doing that anymore. the thing with tifa there at the start certainly seemed a little ooc tho.

This is a realy good story, but what's up with the nose pushing?? Update soon!!
- KG

This is a realy good story, but what's up with the nose pushing?? Update soon!!
- KG

Geep! Rude being mad and yelling! The quiet one! *shakes head* Good chappy though. Whose side is Reeve on?? I like your story much... been waiting for you to update.

Update soon.

Hey...it's sad what you did to Tifa... But honestly guys, why would you get so upset over a "you suck" comment, when it isn't even your story? I'll bet the author managed to brush it off, or at least realize that whoever left the note, was just doing it as a joke and did not mean anything malicious by it. That's the impression I got, anyway. ialarab: a word to the wise. If you're going to get upset over something so trivial, and are going to tell off someone for leaving a silly, meaningless comment like that, it would be to your advantange to use correct spelling and grammar, lest you attract the negative attention to yourself ^^

Good day.

good chappy dude!! Its good that Tifa feels loved again but I agree with Ezri-Candy that she really needs a man!! Just so that she can stick it to Cloud! Haha. It would be great poetic justice if you brought back Sephiroth and made him and Tifa hook up... haha *grin* As for Vincent and Yuffie, maybe they need a life/death situation like Elena and Reno just had to proove their feelings to eachother!! Neways update again soon! YAY

oh and Infamous: "You suck"?? thats really original... If your gonna waist your time being a moron, you might as well come up with some GOOD insults... maybe its you who 'sucks'?

Steff, I know you don't listen to the types of reviews that people like Infamous send...they just don't have anything better to do with their time but flame great writers.

Anyway, this was a very good chapter! I wasn't expecting what happed at all. Hm, what is the meeting with Reeve, Rufus and Rude gonna be like?

As far as Vince and Yuffie, Vince could find a way to tell the ninja abou this feelings for her in the most romantic way possible {Grins} god I'm such a sap!

I'm sure that anything that you come up with will be great!

Please update again soon
Ezri

aw it's so cute. but something needs to happen soon, hehe.

update soon.

YOU SUCK! ...FWAH!

Aww Man! I am happy that Reno told Elena, even though she was faking sleep, but I still feel so bad for Teef! She really needs a man!

Rude needs to get over his anger and join Avalanche and the two turks, then maybe he and Teef can hook up.

If Tseng was alive, I think that perhaps they would have made a good couple, Im not sure why, it just seems like they would.

Excellent Chapter!
Ezri-Candy

hey!! I know I just reviewed chap10, but I just read all the reviews you have recieved, and I think you need to smack all those haters in the mouths (of maybe the hands, so they cant type?) Im a long time reader of fan fic and have just recently started my own fic. I dont have a problem with your spelling or grammer, geez we cant all be perfect. Besides, a good fic isnt about your spelling or your grammer, its about your imagination, and I can see that you have a great one!! Its about how you see a story continuing and how u put it from your vision into words. Who cares if you pay out on certain pairings? its your fic, you can write what u like. If you didnt like Tifa, then treat her like crap in your fic. Thats how you took the story of the game, so thats how your fics gonna be. I think your story is great, considering you probably dont employ a professional editor to fix everything. Pfft to those who have flamed you (even when they say they havent) Keep the story rolling, and if I were you, I would deliberately start spelling stuff wrong, just to ** off all those morons who have nothing better to do with their lives than put down people who are guilty of nothing but using theor imagination!! YAY love your work

hey dude!! this fic is choice!! hurry and update! I feel mighty sorry for Tifa tho... Yuffie and Vincent and so cute :)

Woohoo! Reno/Elena!
Poor Tifa tho'...
Nicely written chapter..looking forward for more!

Aww...I feel bad for Tifa. Why is Reno acting like that towards her? It's like hes scared of her.

I think someone needs to bitchslap some sense into Rufus and Rude so they can see that Reno has changed.

Great Chap!
Ezri-Candy

Naw...make it Reno/Elena and Rude/Tifa. Elena's too nice for Rude and Rude had kind of a crush on Tifa (in the game). And anyway, the way you are writing, Reno and Elena have better chemistry than Reno and Tifa.

So I say, stick with Reno/Elena!