|Reviews for Streets Shorts: Between the Cases|
| Tanith2011 5/18/13 . chapter 5
Loved this first time I read it and still loving it! The dialogue was excellent but I am not surprised since everything I've read of you're always has fantastic dialogue. Loved Steve's cheeky comment on being a lover and not a fighter.
Of course how could Steve turn down fishing when Jeannie will be coming along?
| Mounty Swiss 5/16/13 . chapter 5
Wonderful! Fishing sounds harmless enough, but I am convinced that Steve somehow manage to get into trouble!
| mcatB 5/11/13 . chapter 5
Ah, Jeannie... gets Steve every time. Glad that Mike knows it and is okay with it (encouraged it?). Thanks!
| Cruelest Sea 2/13/13 . chapter 4
Wonderfully done! These are very much in character!
| Mounty Swiss 2/11/13 . chapter 4
...and of course the girl, too!
Love your style. Write on!
| Tanith2011 2/10/13 . chapter 4
Steve chuckled. "You got kicked out of Candlestick Park? Mr. Straight N. Narrow Stone was forcibly removed from a Giants game? Ha!"
Loved that line! I don't know how you do it but you've got a gift with coming up with some of the most memorable lines in your stories.
Oh that was a laugh and a half! Thanks for posting this here. I remembered how amusing it was the first time I read it so I made sure I wasn't drinking my coffee reading it a second time!
| Tanith2011 2/7/13 . chapter 3
Oh, this was hilarious! I was in stitches reading this! "The Wicked Kitty" Ha! I could just imagine the look on Mike's face and Steve in drag OMG! It's also typical of Steve to be pulling Mike's leg like that with such a mischievous joke.
Mike's reaction was pure Gold:
"Stop. Stop. Stop. I don't want to hear anymore," Mike protested.
One of my favorite lines, among many:
"Buddy boy, you are cruising for a bruising." Mike interrupted.
And LOL on Olsen's appearance and comment at the end!
You have a real talent for getting inside the characters' heads and knowing exactly how they would react in all sorts of situations that your great imagination conjures! I was ecstatic when you accepted the challenge - it had your name stamped all over it!
Thanks for giving this a run for my money :-)
| Tanith2011 2/1/13 . chapter 2
Awwww that was great! Loved how Olsen plotted with Steve to get back at the guys for the baby jokes. Have you ever thought about writing a story revolving around Steve's first day as Mike's partner? I think you'd do a wonderful job if your muse ever decides to give it a shot.
| Tanith2011 2/1/13 . chapter 1
Oh this was so much fun to read! Read it three times and still laughing. On a more serious note, you captured the characters caring for one another nicely. You have one wickedly superb sense of humor that really shines through your stories.
| Mounty Swiss 1/30/13 . chapter 2
Love this one!
Should perhaps try something like this when my pupils are too cocky...
| Mounty Swiss 1/30/13 . chapter 1
:-) :-) :-)
Here in the Swiss mountains the rule for men is very simple: What is green is not edible.
One exception: It is possible to feed the green stuff to a cow or pig and then eat the animal.
| Shergar 1/29/13 . chapter 2
That is a great idea! So funny!