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Reviews for: Punishment
LotornoMiko
2003-01-15 . chapter 1
Okay......whoah! Once I got over the shock of the pairing, it made a very nice read. To me, Lotor is about the only character in the various fandoms that I cannot picture as a homosexual. Throw him in with Yurak, and whoah! My mind was blown away!
And you actually made it work, got my heartstrings tugging in sadness. Poor Lotor, poor Yurak! It was a very nice touch having Yurak not be like he was on the show...not right away at least...I liked how you explained the transition between the two (three is you count Robo-Yurak.). And it would be just like Zarkon to set up Yurak in that way, get rid of the problem, and send his message to Lotor over what will not be tolerated.
This was just a very nice piece.
aragonvaar
2002-08-09 . chapter 1
Quirky, but it works. Good to have you back ;)
ebon-drake
2002-08-08 . chapter 1
Whoa,trippy outake.... Your fic was really well-written, and the pairing was
pretty damn unique, too. I especially liked how much detail you put into
Yurak's background, as the show did leave it a little.... blank. Anyways, keep
on writing, and I look forward to seeing more stuff from you :).
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