Wow! Just Wow. I love how spunky and fun Lucy was. Too often she's the young, naive, pure lover. This was just fun and hot! Fantastic job!

That sure is sweet - not vulgar (even though it could easily be) but kind, pure, fierce and joyful...
I love how you write, you bring so much light to your subjects :D

:) Winning with no losing! I especially like her directness - "You're thinking too much," she says, and she's incontrovertibly right!
(How did I miss this when it was first posted? - nearly three weeks ago!)

Lovely and realist as well an adult Lucy who loved fiercely and honestly. I like the stories done about the adult Pevensie's

That was me trying to get back to work...had to read it one more time. Reminded me of the famous scene between Deborah Kerr and Burt Lancaster in From Here to Eternity.

Oh good heavens! real life was a bit heavy today, so I took a lunch break with your lovely story. Now how am I supposed to go back to work? Thank you so much.

Thanks so much for writing this! It's all kinds of awesome.

I am so glad you posted this and your recipient is very lucky to have you. I so enjoy the joy from this, the freedom, the way that Caspian sheds his Telmarine attitudes to become more Narnian. Lucy is glorious here as the confident Queen who lays down the challenge, prevails, and claims her prize. I really like how much fun they are having and Caspian's very humorous inner debate and turmoil.

Well done!

First of all, *great* cover pic! :D

I'm so glad you did put this up!

"But if they were to be any more than dreams, he needed some sign from her first. He did not want to injure their friendship with unwanted advances on his part." 33333 Perfect precious perfection!

""You promised," Lucy called sweetly, looking over her shoulder. " I just keep cackling over this part because Lucy knows *exactly* what she's doing when she invites him, and I get the feeling this (minus the sex, perhaps) is how she got a ton of stuff done as Queen. "But you -promised- to give me that cavalry! You -promised- I could play with whatever I wanted! I want the dragon!"

Absolute love!