That was weird, but it was pretty good.

tt was very good-a boy bcomin a zombie n his feelings
it was an interesting plot
u should write more

my god you wrote about a boy becoming a zombie THAT WAS AMAZING very amazing should keep writing and again AMAZING

Stunning. Really. Yours is talent that seems to be overlooked by so many.

My God. You are. INCREDIBLE! I totally think about this when I think of Raccoon City! I love how you managed to capture the horror, sadness and depression in the event!

You MUST write more Raccoon City fics! This is is great work!!

~SSX19~ =)

I liked it. Nothing like a good zombie thingy... Well... i could ramble about resident evil all day... but i wont... take care.---Zero Is Nothing

hey, Oh My God! This story was sooo good! I like the way you made the protagonist a zombie! Thats a first in my book, i've never read anything where the main character is a zombie! Nice work! Write many more stories!
*Kazuko Itoe*

hey nice fic man. if you ever do one about jill or leon or claire, or carlos, god i hope you dont do one about carlos, you should note someone laying on the ground starting to turn into a zombie.

That was great storytelling right there. I wonder how long it takes before the kid starts munching on other zombies.

Thats pretty good. Reminds me alot of a guy I used to RP with on Yahoo.

Dude that was damned awsome, I totally reccomend you continue with this or something to that extent cause this was brillantly written for being so short. ^___^ I loved it!

Next chapter should explain how Jill Valentine comes by and kicks his head off :D

I felt really sorry for the person telling the story! This was really good :)

Very nice story, you perfectly captured the person's last moments in Raccoon City. ^_^ I'm guessing he woke up near that fire hydrant that's gushing water in front of the Raccoon Police Department?