Dude. You posted this in the beginning of the year.
Which makes me upset.
I could've read this months ago!

Nicely done! At first, it was merely a repeat of the end of the Kyoto Arc. But you also gave the side of Yukio's thoughts this time, and with a little bit more of Rin's at that. Thumbs up!

Awww. nice

Great work! The beginning had a bit more tell than show, but it really picked up at the end. I quite enjoyed reading this.

You seriously have talent, this is good.

I loved it! I mean, seriously great story! You have real talent for storytelling. And the Kyoto arc was awesome!

this story made me sad

Asdhekg! This is pretty absolutely amazing :D

When I first read this scene in the manga, I was angry with Yukio. Rin finally did something spectacularly right (though not without risk), and all he gets from his own brother is a punch to the face. But, I've think you've wonderfully captured *why* Yukio punched him and all of the emotions that were behind it. And, the end tugs at my heart just so. It's a very nice piece.

Awww! So sweet.