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| Reviews for MLP: Mark of the Outsider |
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   Mmeggy999 5/27/13 . chapter 5Please update soon! I love this fanfic! |
| Lurker 5/1/13 . chapter 3 I had to skim through this chapter, but all I can say is Celestia seems a little OOC. |
| Lurker 5/1/13 . chapter 1 You have moderately good writing skills. It's an enjoyable story so far (even if the ending is a tad cliche) and I only have a small gripe about it. It's Sweet Apple Acres, not Sweet Apple Arches. If your going to write a story about a show, at least learn it's lore. |
| Shinigami2509 4/23/13 . chapter 3 Was somewhat interesting last chapter, but now things are going downhill. It's just my preference, but I can't stand characters just turning into ponies, those that do are instantly able to move easily, and apparent out of character behavior, being the instant casting of a vicious spell on an unidentified, and possibly innocent stranger. |
| Ice assassin Ace 3/27/13 . chapter 5 epic fic also would you like a oc |
| TyTyTech 3/4/13 . chapter 4 Great chapter and I hope to see more of this soon! |
| shadow juubi overlord 2/3/13 . chapter 2 Awesome story! Please update soon! |
| mooneyboys 1/30/13 . chapter 1 Wow this is a really good story! I cant wait to read more from this story! |
