LOL these are hilarious, but so true. PLEASE update! :)

Is is hilarious! I love his story! Keep writing,
Millie85998

haha you should also have her reply to rape.

LOL*5 man! This is an awesome story dude! I loved every single second of it...but you could've mentioned the crazy idea of a sleepover for a month and what kind of sick parents would be that nuts to let their kids go especially when the invite was sent by a kid whose folks are out of town!

Neither the less it was swag as Jerry would put it. Please update soon and keep rocking on. Stay cool man!

lol! But can you say how she feels for jack? Like I don't even like him or I like him or I dunno.

Hahaha, go Kim! Update again! This story is AWESOME! I love these types of fanfics!

BlueBeltNinja

Lol Kim your right. But aren't any of this just the slightest bit good?

Hehe, hilarious! Keep it up! :D UPDATE!

BlueBeltNinja

Ha-ha-ha dude! That was hillarious! Nice job on the story man, you are really good at this! Update soon!

This is HILARTY. love it, sounds exactly like Kim!

I feel the same way but I have a little question are you trying to piss off the writers?

I LOVE YOU KIMMY FUCK YOU BRETT

Brilliant...absolutely brilliant...I would be lying if I said I don't like the cheesy fanfics...I am a sucker for romance...but seriously everyone to make a plot revolved around kick...anyways I thought this fanfic was really clever

Nice job dude. This freaking hilliarious man. Update soon, this is awesome and you are great at it!

:D I love this! Keep going, please!