YAY! I'm a massive fan of Artemis and Apollo. You kept constantly saying how good Apollo was at archery and I was starting to feel annoyed at how Artemis was left out.

"There's one more thing," Hermes said, adjusting his winged cap. "Ares said something about wanting archery lessons."

At this, the blonde god snorted with laughter and finally looked up at the messenger. "Did you tell him to ask Artemis?"

Hermes smirked and cocked an eyebrow. "Ares learning archery from a girl? I don't think so."

Apollo smiled. "There are some who say that she can outshoot me."

My faith in you has been restored. Great writing.

It's taking me way to long to get around to reviewing this!, but i loved this story the whole way through and the ending was done wonderfully. You couldn't have ended it any better :D

oh i love this story so much, it brought tears to my eyes all the way through. Thank you so much for this :)

yey i got more :D thank you that was brilliant xxx

This is seriously the best epilogue ever because it makes me both sad (because it's over) and happy (because it's so good).

That was such a good ending. Wait was that the ending? Oh yeah, that was the epilogue so that means end of story or something like that. Anyways that was a great story loved the ending. I thought the Apollo and Hermes on the table part was pretty funny!

Yay, their back together! This was a very well written chapter and very long too which makes it even better! Anyways although I'm Christian I didn't really find it that offending. Great chapter as always!

This was a really sweet chapter. I hope it gets better between Hermes and Apollo.

gquavalsuee that was adorable please write another please please please

Wow, That was a great chapter! I haven't read this story before so I'm not sure what's going to happen next. Update soon!

Okay I just noticed this and I had to tell you that I love your bio. The poem was great the gay marriage thing was great all of it was just so great!

Yay, you posted it! This a great chapter as always.

Haha loving it one of the best I have read. Please keep it up

Oooh, are you rewriting this? I like this fiction as I always do with your stories! Keep posting, please :)

YOU BETTER CONTINUE THIS! OR FACE THE WRATH OF ME! MWAH HA HA HA (chokes) HA! :D