good written but sad

Awww this is such a sad chapter; with that dream of Sue and her dad being so real. But at least Sue knows that her dad might be gone in body but he will always be there with her in spirit when needed.

That is what Carla needed; a swift kick in the butt about her attitude towards Sue. Thank you Lucy

they feel well all emotion which not Sue sweat feel

Thanks for the flashback on a teacher that made a difference in Sue's life

Ok so the funeral is over and life starts over for Sue

they feel well all emotion which not Much sweat feel

Very nice history... They feel the sadness and very l 'émotion which you feel. Thank you for thinking in of non-American, since France, a lot of evil to understand certain expression.

Great story! :)

Awwwwww thank you Rover for giving Jack and Sue a chance to kiss. I am sorry that things were so bad between Mr and Mrs Thomas before he died. I think it is sweet that Mrs Thomas is enjoying seeing her daughter so happy and so in love and wished she was closer and more affectionate to her children

that of revelation hasten suite of connaitre

Ohh Jack and Sue getting some older brother\future brother in love advice from Bill. I love that idea. Poor Mrs Thomas, she is hurting really badly after losing her husband

Aww poor sue ,jack is their for her
please let them tell each other how they feel please x

that to say on one such history otherwise to go on

not very sympas the family of the quoting of his mother but to continue this history