Roger that soldiers.

Posting a chapter every day was what I used to do. I suggest that you take a little more time, like two or three days to write a chapter. You can have more words and longer chapters.

Other than that, you're doing a good job. Keep it up!

This is great, I got a good few laughs from both chapters. Can't wait for more :3

"Methaney Wrath"?

Lol, i got confused there too. I think i meant that would welcome any review, as long as it is logical. For example: "I like tacos" wouldn't seem logical. :D

nice, although, what EXACTLY do you mean by "an actual review"? if you don't tell by what you mean, then how will people know what to tell you?

Well, actually, there are three noobs.

Thanks guys, for reviewing

PS: I plan on including a ...special chapter in the story, it will have crossover, so,
should i change this into a crossover story or just a normal one?

I have to admit, having two noobs in Halo makes a great story. I look forward to reading more!

Lol made me laugh, would actually make a good story.