| Reviews for Untouchables |
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PeabodyMack 9/23/05 . chapter 9You're a genius, and this is hilarious, but I nearly had a panic attack when I saw when you'd stopped writing! Three years ago! I know I speak for many when I beg you to go back to it. Pretty please? Though maybe it's been so long...but it's never too late! And to leave it without even a cute couple at the end of chapter nine to console the desperate reader...not nice. Begging, absolutely begginn...I'm on my knees, though you can't tell... |
sara 10/10/04 . chapter 9 this is a cute story so far, but i didint understand the last pharagraph though, could you please explain it in the next chapter? thanks! Update sonn! |
LadyRach 8/5/04 . chapter 9Wow I just picked up reading this story, and I keep laughing out loud. My family thinks I'm crazy. But this chapter's ending is cruel and unusual! Update fast so I know what happens next. Please. :-) |
Dreamless-Mermaid 7/29/04 . chapter 9You MUST, MUST, MUST FINISH THIS! This is absolutely hilarious and I love it! I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter, if you ever happen to write some more of it. But I hope you do! Please! ((begs)) lol Dreamless_Mermaid |
ME 5/9/04 . chapter 9 Damn i hate you for stopping here |
ME 5/9/04 . chapter 9 Damn i hate you for stopping here |
AnimeGirl 4/9/04 . chapter 9 wow! ths fic is amazing and i hope u continue soon! I can't wait till u update and i can't wait to c who is next! I didn't really get the end of chapter 9 but i'm sure u cn explain it to me next chappie, right? anyway, keep up the good work!:):) -M ps: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Queen Kez the Wicked 2/18/04 . chapter 1once again: THE SHEEP! AAHAH THE SHEEP NOTHING WILL EVER BEAT THE SHEEP! -STILL dying- ooh, and Snoddy at model? yum. NKotB goes so well with this story. MONDIE I LOVE YOU! |
AlphaOmegaLove 12/19/03 . chapter 4hey there i love ur story i think i read it three times. ok im dying to know wats next. please keep writing. thanks anyway ok i g2g byes |
Frodolives07 8/28/03 . chapter 8Did you die or something? I've been waiting for, like forever. Update soon. That mob of Furry pink bunnies are on their way to you if you dont update this they will eat you alive, savvy. Okay I'm done ranting. But please update. I really like this fic. Come on you know you wanna update, don't resist the voices. They know where you live, they're very helpful and some times even smart, or maybe that's just the voices in MY head. Oh well. Listen to the voices...they're saying, UPDATE DAMNIT! Now I'm protecting you from the Printer Mafia. They are after you, unfortunatly for you, my printer, their leader wants your head on a platter. Oh, and he asks do you perfer to be BBQed, roasted or flaimed broiled. Yes, my printer is getting agrivated of me hitting it every time I hit it cuz you don't update. Savvy? |
Jamie 8/22/03 . chapter 1 r ya ever gonna finish? its been hanging for ever!im a former NMLer btw..i keep checkin and u never finish it ::cries:: |
Petals 6/29/03 . chapter 9oh this is so hilarious ! but you are so mean for ending it with a cliffhanger hope you update soon Petals |
Frodolives07 5/18/03 . chapter 9Hey. update or I will send a mob of furry pink bunnies and a rabid chipmunk on you. Please please update hurry, I can't hold them off much longer. |
Artemis-chan of Redwing 4/19/03 . chapter 9Ack, what happened? That's not cool, cutting off this awsome story right there! I have to say, everything's been rather sweet up to now. They're all so cute! *loud girlish squeal* Anyway, that's just really awsome, htough some of Relic's plans seem a bit...outlandish. Especially the cheerleader one. It screams "failure" at me. Anyway, update soon, please! Artemis-chan |
Taffee 4/2/03 . chapter 9 Hey girlie! You have to update this story! I am so anxious to read the next chapter! Please hurry and update the story! Taffee |