I must say Im not really a fan of short stories, and I dont know how you did it, but I feel like this is enough :) (Well, at least for now that is for sure. You can always continue it if you have some idea, or leave it open and let our imagination work right? :) ) I like how you nicely described setting and Sarahs emotions in few words and it was easy to read :)

It's sounds like a great beginning.

well it locks nice when do you think you will post the next one?