|Reviews for The Bishop, The King, and The Knight|
| IdaPhantomhive 6/18/13 . chapter 21
Sorry for not reviewing lately (Kinda waiting for some Kuroko/Misaka action XD) great chapter :3 a character song would be very interesting i support the idea!
| Graviton Bomber 6/18/13 . chapter 21
Great work as usual I really liked the end of the chapter
| Lady Poison Dreams 6/16/13 . chapter 20
I must say I didn't expect tremendous leap in events and appreciate the warning in your author note (good girl, you're a good girl ), so I will be alert to future updates. ("Yes we can"). Now with respect to the chapter, I cannot believe what I say now, but by a "strange reason" (which has stars in her eyes), this chapter has impacted me more than the previous one (without bombing action 3) . Holly crap finally the return of Queen, and she's on a mission with Kuroko, i think I'll need another doctor (I hope that after the mission they don't killing each other or worse ... end up like ... best friends :D), luckily we have this new "mind girl" called Avon to control the situation (interesting girl with great skills, I really hope a lot of it in future chapters) ... and of course Oneeni to relax Kuroko's tension when most needed.
Changing the subject, I know this is temporary, but I cannot help but feel sorry for the mental state of Misaki ... seriously, when she and Kuroko looked each other, I could feel the tension and suspense in the scene and really hoped ehm ... . I don't know, something extraordinary and full of action (cough cough cats' fight) as a final option Misaki had thrown a cup at Kuroko n_n (that is a action move too, especially if the cup has tea)... but all I could feel was fear and a complete transformation of the environment leaving Kuroko like bad girl. (TTxTT noooooooooooooooooooo), either way you have created a very interesting scenario for this new bow and I expect great changes in the characters that includes Misaki-chan.
Of course I won't deny that I laughed a bit in some parts such as when Avon said: "Aleister would be very unhappy with you if you were to do anything rash ..." with every intention that Kuroko stop , only to be brutally ignored hahaha, luck for next Avon-san XD or end when Misaki starts to get dizzy on the plane and Avon gives her an airsickness bag ...somehow i interpret that point as "as you wish my queen, paper or plastic? "XD
And i don't forget I thank you for clarifying certain points from the previous story, like what happened with the Queen or why Misaka never said a comment about Misaki and some extra details 3.
Overall a VERY INTERESTING chapter, you left me really wanting to know what will happen, so officially I am at your disposal for all you ... cough cough I mean I'm looking forward to your update, as the story continues surprising me.
Take care of yourself!
PS: Hell I really You really left me very curious with what happened to Aleister, what the hell is a SE field?!
PS2: Just because she wasn't angry or hateful didn't mean she wanted to have anything more to do with that... con esa qué?! witch, bitch, sexual slave… please somebody tell me the real answer or I’ll think very bad things! XD
| Lady Poison Dreams 6/16/13 . chapter 19
Finally I can finish this chapter snif snif, I'm so happy that I could read past the fourth paragraph, ehem but that's another story ... well, starting with general observations, I must say I feel bombarded with so much action again (doctor over here!) and you changed the film Tomb Raider to Indiana Jones combined with Prince of Persia (the classic game). XD
At first you gave us some "pieces" of information about the space that is connected with the history of the "sisters" along with a number of scenarios "very interesting" of Aleister plan, giving us the drug of excitement for the future of history.
I won't ramble about all scenarios, as they are varied and don't wanna to sound like a "fan girl machine" in my way of praise them, but I will highlight two things: first was how to write action scenes, all were very complete but at the same time they were precise, to give us a cool picture of the situation (says a crazy girl that doesn't know English and she understood all situations very well, so congratulations for a brilliant work 3), second were the ingenious ways to use the skills Kuroko to solve problems (although some feel that it was a bad example for the children, you know, what with stealing weapons from other XD).
Now by switching to "fgm" of course I'll ramble by specific moments, as one that made me smile more than once: "Oneeni get over here!" ... "Take off my helmet and kiss me ..." what?! without any prepared environment, Kuro-chan, that's wrong XD (I apologize, but sometimes my imagination is something versatile and it escapes of some "frames" to give me a little more comedic situations 6:) or other that I found very interesting, as when Prometheus explained what a golem or "between in lines" I wonder why the four saints failed to see Kuroko? and... mmm well Vento why she is so "lady" with her vocabulary? ... hell with that mouth she prays? XD. Anyway a chapter very interesting and really congratulate you for your dedication when investigating certain facts behind the moments... that speaks very highly of you as a writer
PS: “Oneeni patted her on the head and signed, "That's okay... nobody's perfect..."” ehem Oneeni dear, what does this mean? in some ways sounds like an evaluation for your ideal boyfr... ehem ideal girlfriend XD
PS2: When I read this part: “But the sudden appearance of so many holy relics that had been lost during the Great Schism was a complete shock” the first thing that crossed my mind was the pope screaming like a fan girl at extreme hahahaha
| KainUltima 6/15/13 . chapter 19
I like the new outfit for Oneeni, just getting that out of the way. Also yay sign language. Moving on.
Seems we're doing temple stuff now, interesting that a certain homosexual transporter is triggering the traps and not just warping through everything but I can see why she doesn't.
I like the black knight scenes. They give Kuroko an even more powerful feel to her than normal. It reminds me of when she was the scourge.
I'm also intrigued by the threes inability to detect Kuroko. I wonder if this only affects certain characters or if this will become a major thing in future endeavors. Dat flapping. Makes me all the more excited for your two releases.
Also holding out for more Kuro/Oneeni fluff. It's what I live for. (Okay I'm lying but it's awesome to read.)
| KainUltima 6/15/13 . chapter 18
And in my excitement I realized I forgot to review 18 and 19. Better late than never.
I'm glad to see that she's keeping connection with Konori and Uiharu. I mean, it would be a bit out of character for her to do so but I think we've already crossed that line so I'm not sure why I'm bringing it up! Moving on. AEM and AIM...interesting definitions there. I have to say...for an OC of an existing network of characters, Oneeni is probably the most beloved one I've ever encountered in any fanfic.
That aside, I enjoyed this chapter (still didn't care much for 17, sorry.) and I wonder where exactly this is taking place in the actual plot of the series...
| KainUltima 6/15/13 . chapter 20
Love it. PRESS IT, PRINT IT, MAIL IT, SUBSCRIBE TO IT IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY!
It look liked you had a small error here...
The associate laughed, "be sure to tell him that," they said as they left.
I'll be sure? or should Alleister have said it? Doesn't really matter.
I love the tip off to the episode where Kuroko was Obama at the beginning. I also like your explanation for the Queens behavior. I can also see this working since she too has stars in her eyes like the people she controls. Excited to read 20 and 21 when they come out.
| Lady Poison Dreams 6/7/13 . chapter 18
I can understand why it was difficult to write the chapter, so I will not be too severe with you, so just relax and (ego and sadism mode: ON!) ... ehem i mean, I could never say something far from a simple criticism of a reader , because I'm not a writer XD.
I honestly didn't expect a chapter like this, but I think it was right thing writing it, before proceeding with next topics ... and combine them with new topics was pretty smart, because you gave us a link to a panoramic view of the situation (and not stay with the impact of the moments of the previous chapter).
First, I will discuss the outstanding things... I'll say it bluntly, Konori really scale up in my love parameters, a deep and poignant reflection ... and she makes us clear that everything she cares about Kuroko, and although the train of thought it was natural and normal (nothing extraordinary or exaggerated) I don't know if it was the splendid writing you used, but I felt like I was watching a movie when I read that part, every detail seemed so clear in my head (crazy girl in action XD). Of course i not forgetting Saten's participation, which in my opinion is very important, because she provided an objective and background view about Kuroko's situation (she always gives, just at the exact point of things).
Although was wonderful Konori-senpai and Saten attitudes and I must say "a but" and that but is about Uiharu reaction in the episode, I think it was something vague and limited (and when Kuroko called by name in the office scene I found it so strange ... where was the Shirai-san?)
Now regarding Oneeni like "speaker girl", it was a pretty interesting explanation and you answer me certain details about her, but you left me with a question. She basically an Esper who uses magic, regardless of the form ... but that shouldn't damage Oneeni's body as original theories novels (such as Tsuchimikado) or is there something I missed in the explanation?.
Independent of all, I really enjoyed reading chapter, was an injection soothing after of action the previous chapter. So girl take care and continues to improve your wonderful work.
PS: Oneeni because you have to be so fucking cute!
PS2: I think Misaka is fighting with ITEM right now, but is not like an important fact XD.
| Lady Poison Dreams 6/7/13 . chapter 17
This was a long chapter and a bit hard to read (I apologize for my limited English D:), but it was very exciting. I could begin to describe the best of the episode, but first I want to congratulate you not only by the content delivered, I don't know how to explain it, but somehow I felt a noticeable improvement in the way of make the scenes, the rudeness of the characters, flexibility in changing environments and of course attractive delicacy you showed in your writing the scenes, giving me as a reader a impeccable guide about how to feel during the course of the chapter.
Beginning with fan's part (of course, I cannot be a serious woman for long 6:), it will sound a little strange, but I didn't feel sad when I read about "Oneeni's die" ... I think after reading about Tut's scene, I have complete confidence in Heaven Canceller. He can "fix" everything 6: ... but I think is very interesting is your description about anger and good the new state that Kuro learned lol "like someone teach a child about colors" XD.
Of course after a part full of action, you touch my heart with the most cliché and romantic part of all anime stories: when the situation worsens and a protagonist asks her lov... cough cough friend that she must run before "Kuro is surprised" with Onneni hidden skills, and finally she says one sentence: "... but I'll never leave you behind ... after all, you did not leave me ... "and although I couldn't open my mouth, because I was drinking coffe, I admit that was a big surprise (officially my apologize to Oneeni, for I mocking of her prayers) XD.
Another part that I really liked was the Lammington with Elizaretta, really surprised the character ... well I can imagine that he is a powerful wizard, but greater impact when I read specific situations where the character is involved ... so I am very pleased with his actions in this episode (although I almost had a fit when the man called him "Marshall", ehm that's a coincidence, right?).
And finally you give us a fairly relaxed environment with Kuroko and Oneeni's scene, a scene not romantic, but one of the sweetest of the story due to the beautiful hidden meaning (if it haven't, sorry but officially I'm crazy XS) but Prizrak appeared, that makes me wonder if this scenario is the opening of the future that appear in the novels (some of "the 3rd war") or a parallel situation will happen during that time.
A chapter that left me many questions and too much margin for interpretation, which makes me crazy, yet I love (masochistic mode: ON!). Again I congratulate the excellent work quiet girl and there is nothing to forgive.
PS: Oneeni, why you gotta be so great OC, I need to know more about her! 3
PS2: Kuroko is starting to take too many memories of her "adventures" ... an ax! hell and I thought that with the grenade launcher was too much, is like Lara Croft!
PS3: An important detail that I really liked was that Kuroko didn't resolve all case by herself, that allows the character to win some "fame" of the public, but doesn't make her a invincible girl XD.
| Flygon Master 6/2/13 . chapter 20
Wow didn't see that coming... The Queen is back and the merry band is off to America! Lol I am a little confused about the chapter dice up, but I suppose it will all be sorted out eventually; it did feel like this chapter was supposed to come later, but maybe that's all in my head? Lol either at good job
| Graviton Bomber 6/2/13 . chapter 20
Great work as usual
| Flygon Master 6/1/13 . chapter 19
Tomb Raider Kuroko: And the Sunken Temple! Lol well done with this one! I felt myself hanging on ever word, the best part is I could actually see it happening in my head; I love it when writers can do there job so well you can actually invision the scenario! Keep up the amazing work and I'll continue to anticipate your updates!
| Flygon Master 6/1/13 . chapter 18
I really, really loved the POV's from Konori and Uiharu! They were written so well and the last part with them was so sweet; I really do hope you play more upon the sisterly bond the three seem to have, because I just love the way it works in your story.
Prometheus also intrigues me; I had almost forgotten about him... I await the time you reveal what he truly is...
| chaosrin 5/24/13 . chapter 19
Typo:in holder her
The shoddy cup!...wonder if she really gave it to the pope
Its nice to see you add some humor...the story could do with some more humor on Kuruko though serous as she is and it can get a bit tiring with the damage she taking, poor Kuroko.
The blind super holy guys aspect are hilarious not sure if you already address why they can't see her, but the sweet fantasy! of her unleashing her brutality on them, easier said than done.
Nice Indy reference in skipping them, the power of the atheist practical solutions!
Great update as usual!
| xshiraikurokox 5/22/13 . chapter 18
more kuroxmiko please? please? thanks. i am really looking forward to it. i am reading your stories all over again. i love it. really.