I noticed you haven't updated in a couple months. I hope everythings allright in "Real Life" and I supremely hope you come back to this story soon! It's deffinately one of the best Immortals Fanfictions I've read so far! Very true to the books, even with your OCs added in. Are they going to run into Thad before they get off the island? Who are her parents? So many questions - can't wait to read your answers!

love this story please update it asap!

please update you are a wonderful writer i hope you will not quit the story

Time to get writing! I need to read a new chapter! ;)

I am loving this! Needed a fix and you have provided! Great job.

Can't wait to read more!

Even though I'm exhausted, I couldn't stop reading! I'm a fan! Keep writing.

next chapter please i am really enjoying it read just like her work keep it up

Yes an update!
Anywho, let's get down to it.

My, my... It's getting hot and heavy between that two, I just love how Uilleam stops himself from his natural 'instinct' toward Bethany. He tries to protect and provide for her first before he gets his sexy, manclaws at her. That's very admirable, even if that's technically what all the other Lykae (hmmmmm Garreth. Yummm :P ) did. But hey, he was in a cell deprived of his instinct and running in the wild. Some men would've just got it on with Bethany. Especially since she's willing too. So good for Uilleam. He's an upstanding Lykae male who is sexy, delicious and other good compliments.

Oh my gosh. You hate Sienna too? Well, I'm guessing you're not too fond of her since you replaced her. I don't know why but I just don't like any of the girls in LotU. Your OCs however, are all well loved by yours truly. I'm already very fond of Ailith. Also, since Mairi is going to be with Strider then Strider would be the step-dad of Ailith which is amusing because Paris and Strider are bro-friends. (Yeah, new word for friends-slash-brothers.)

I hope you get around to writing Paris and Ailith's story too. But something is bugging me, how can Mairi have more than one mate? I thought Lykae(s?) mate for life once and then when that person is gone then they're just alone. Or has this been explained and I'm just having a dumb moment?

I can't remember.

Ah well, I shall end this for now. So overall, I love this chapter because we get to see Paris and Jazira. Also, I found out that you're not too keen on Sienna either. That made my day XD

I was having a very bad day at work, but this new chapter definitely cheered me up ;) Excellent, can't wait for more!

Yes an update! :D

AND SHE HAS BEEN FOUND. Also, info about Uilleam's terrible past. I wasn't expecting him to be a child-blood-bank but I guess that's why he hates them fanged ones very much. Can't blame him.

Ooooh sexy times
Will there be more sexy times here or are you going to cut them off? As long as I see the romance, I don't mind either way. I'm sure whatever you pick would work.

Yeah you go girl! Be better than Emma! (I have nothing against her but she's not really a favourite of mine).

So then Thad would be more vamp while Beth is more phantom? Interesting. Personally, I'm also rooting for a glowing berserker. He'd be sexy and light-y. He'd be the light to his future female's life! XD

Anywhooo I'll be anxiously anticipating your next update!

After deciding to re-read the series (specially Carrow and Malkom's) again I have decided that your story is the only other thing that I actually look forward to. Other than waiting for Gena Showalter's new Angel book to finally arrive in my doorstep.

And awww! She found Ruby and helped them. Kudos for her! :D But now she has to be found by her sexaaay Lykae.

Is Jazira going to be present throughout the whole story even after they get out of the island? I like her and I think she's a good friend fro Bethany. I mean she /was/ there to help Bethany after vivisection and she's badass. What more is there to need?

Ooooh. The Armageddon has started it seems. BTW, if Ellie's going to be here then by association Lothaire has to kind-of-be-here too right? Please? Please please please with whip cream and cherry on top?

I just need some Lothaire in my laifu! TT

Agonies all around for the sexy Lykae. I feel his pain.
...well, not really but the sentiment is the same.

I guess I wanna find out what kind of person Uilleam is too. I'm very interested how you'll show him as because so far, all I know is that he's hot and I like him and his brother. That's it.

I wanna know how others see him now. How he'll be with Bethany.

PS.
I'm just obsess at how the Lykae are all about their mates. It's so sweet. :D

Oh my gosh. zomg. Paris. My favourite character from LotU is here. I love you I wanna know though, is he going to be paired up with anyone as a background fact thing or is he sticking to what's cannon there is for him?

The Lykae is back
Gawd. How I adore those sexy Scots!