Reviews for phantom pain
vikkaayBYAH 3/18/13 . chapter 1
:( beautiful... but still. wah.
CaughtInTheAttic 3/17/13 . chapter 1
I've re-read this about three times now and I still can't get over what a wonderful idea it is to show Sakura and Sasuke's relationship from this angle. And the way you execute it is just so beautiful, like all your writings, that I find myself hoping for an update in my inbox every couple of weeks. Can't wait for another chapter, and keep up the awesome writing!
EWHH its Kenna 3/4/13 . chapter 1
You're an amazing writer; never forget that! :)
delirious0ne 3/4/13 . chapter 1
I like the start and the raw emotions Sakura is going through with sasuke's return. Can't wait for more reading. Update soon :)
Katara 3/4/13 . chapter 1
(really need to start logging on)

I loved it, please continue.

Going to read 'The Road of Touch, The Road to Feel' Now.

The-one-who-is-plotting

K-H
goddess-ish 3/2/13 . chapter 1
I really hope you continue this! The angst! I love the angst!
sophialy 2/27/13 . chapter 1
continue this story please! :)
LaughsRFun 2/25/13 . chapter 1
This is exactly how I would like for Sasuke's return to play out.

Because-let's be honest-too much has gone down for them to return to the somewhat happy/naive days of genin Team 7, especially between Sasuke and Sakura. And no matter how much Sakura loves and cares for Sasuke...the dude was going to kill her. No hesitation-no doubts about it. If Kakashi and Naruto hadn't showed up, she'd probably be dead. That's not something you can just get over like everyone's expecting. I look forward to seeing how Sasuke will make things up to her if he can.

Great writing!
mililli 2/22/13 . chapter 1
You portrayed Sasuke perfectly, I loved it! Can't wait for the update
Midnight Blue 2/22/13 . chapter 1
This is hauntingly beautiful. That is all.
butsuhika 2/19/13 . chapter 1
I like this. The Road of Touch, The Road to Feel is also one of my top favorite fic but I'm saddened that Len hasn't been updating this fic. I'm glad there's another author out there who is also writing a fic about mending the relationship between Sakura and Sasuke esp. after their attempt to kill each other. I look forward to the next chapter.
ikarma 2/15/13 . chapter 1
this was hauntingly perfect. I've been waiting for a fanfic like this, one to address just how traumatized sakura must be. this fic far surpassed any expectations i had and i can't wait for the next part
Nara Merald 2/15/13 . chapter 1
I really love this because I'm glad that Sakura has the self respect to be able to say "No, it's not okay" and you're writing realistically enough that it's believable and logical.

I'd love to see a follow on looking at how her friends and Konoha deal with the whole situation- do they mistakenly assume it's all going to be okay and blame Sakura for it? Do they look on her with understanding and try to discreetly support her? Do they turn on Sasuke?
DeepPoeticGirl 2/9/13 . chapter 1
I always wanted to do something like this! Well, technically I already have but I wish I could do more. Let them go in a different way, or kind of test different scenarios. This is definitely interesting though. :)
ViOlEt-KaT 2/8/13 . chapter 1
I like this approach very much. It's original and "logical." I've seen a lot of post revenge/war stories about the two where Sasuke's the unchangeable bastard and Sakura is still in love, or awkward, or hateful towards the former. Never have I seen fear and remorse depicted in any of the fanfiction I see. (I'm sure there are in existence, but I'm just talking about my own experience) It's a challenging aspect to take when writing a story like that and I respect you for taking it on. I look forward to the next chapter. :D
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