Well, three of them that were worth it.

This one was my personal favourite and I would definetly go to buy to that bakery.

As always, the way you write is easy and good, and you can feel the situation as if you were there hearing them. I loved it :)

I hope you write some other things. I'll be waiting for them!

See you!

PS: My main language is Spanish and I'm not 100% perfect at English, so sorry if something sound odd :S