Oh, this AU could get FUN. I guess I always did picture Lora and Yori falling into a mother/daughter situation, and Lora having this balance of reverence and responsibility for the digital world.

I love the description of Yori's skin as hot and staticky, and the observation that there isn't an graffiti. The idea of Lora being thrown into the Grid is great, and I like the reverence Yori has for Lora and how she calls Tron a "firewall", but I also like how the story doesn't focus on the guys. It's a great backwards look at the movie. Her noticing that there's a bit of a leap between transporting an orange and transporting a human brain was great. This was really fun to read, both as a straight adventure story and as a gender-flipped rewriting of the movie. Nice job!