| Reviews for Firehouse Kids: Severide's Daughter |
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Deanne 5/2/13 . chapter 4 Please, Please, Please update |
Guest 4/9/13 . chapter 1 please update |
Elizabeth 4/7/13 . chapter 4 I love this story. Please keep updating! I think it would be interesting to see Darden rebelling and how Kelly tries to keep her in line. |
Georgia 4/7/13 . chapter 1 Great Story! I love it! Please keep updating. |
Annie 4/7/13 . chapter 4 I love your story! I think it would be interesting to see how Darden copes with the death of Jimmy by alcohol and the like and how Kelly and K2 react in their over protective manner. |
jh126 4/4/13 . chapter 4What?! W..wh..wh! Why'd you stop there?! Geez, that's just mean! Leave us hanging like that. Come on! *whine* You got some 'splainin' to do! |
lhayestodd 4/4/13 . chapter 1Cute story ! |
blackberry959 4/3/13 . chapter 4Great update. Hope Kelly apologizes to Shay and his daughter when they get back |
Annie 3/29/13 . chapter 3 Love this story. I hope you continue. |
Recovering4life 3/25/13 . chapter 3OMG! That brought back memories! Love it! LOL |
jh126 3/25/13 . chapter 3Lol...Shay can be so harsh to Kelly! Not that the Neanderthal didn't deserve to sleep on the couch after the stupid shit that came out of his mouth! But, how great is it that those kids know what a good marriage their parents have, that when Kelly has been delegated to the couch, it's because, fearfully, something's seriously wrong? Hope Kelly and Shay can kiss and make up, and that kelly will improve his parenting skills, cause I know he's capable of better. Update soon. |
jh126 3/25/13 . chapter 2Love that Kelly and Leslie are married! Open marriage, my eye! I don't blame Kelly for snatching Darden out of Matt Jr's room (what was Casey thinking, the bedroom door was shut?!), but OMG, a foating bedroom for K2?! So wrong, I'd have given Kelly more credit than that. I hope Shay straightens that out real fast (in private). If this is you being bored in another meeting, please stay bored! |
Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 3 Great story! keep writing |
blackberry959 3/24/13 . chapter 3Loving Severide family life. Can't wait to read how they kiss and make up |
blackberry959 3/8/13 . chapter 2I hope you get bored at work again. This was cute...especially how Shay described there home life. Wonder who K2 is taking on the boat? |