|Reviews for Digimon Adventure 01: Another Story|
| LILFOC 3/5/13 . chapter 8
Interesting..new crests the older versions of TK and Kari
wonder where their 8yr old selves are it would be interesting to see how they cope on their own (an patamon and gatomons megas are awsome P)
Again poor Matt and Tai
| Guest 3/4/13 . chapter 7
Xros Heart! So the Gate of Destiny leads to other dimensions... Good story!
| LILFOC 3/4/13 . chapter 7
aww poor Matt and Tai...not only have they lost TK and Kari but their digimon too!
The reactions were expected though
should have had a flash back with Matt and TK
Hope the two little ones and their angles will be alright and return in epic fashion! (after all you can't kill of two 8yr olds but they should reappear straigh away)
will they save sora? cant wait to read your next update
| The Keeper of Worlds 3/4/13 . chapter 8
This looks good now:)
| The Keeper of Worlds 3/3/13 . chapter 7
Wow Taiki and the Xros Heart crew are there now!
| LILFOC 2/22/13 . chapter 6
| The Keeper of Worlds 2/21/13 . chapter 6
Nice turn around! I hope they get Impmon back, a lord with their side would be a major edge!
Not 2 mention it IS possible 2 get Davis and Lucemon by actually using the sin itself! Just make their PRIDE wounded by the big secret leader and bam!
| The Keeper of Worlds 2/15/13 . chapter 5
Man, poor kid, these are some sad stories, wonder who is messing with them if Impmon never wanted all that?
| LILFOC 2/12/13 . chapter 4
Interesting battle )
They recently released the Digimon adventure RPG on Psp in Japan... you can unlock the megas of all the digidestined
will you have all the kids and their digimon go mega?
| The Keeper of Worlds 2/11/13 . chapter 4
Great job and I hope you can update this soon! I lke Ulforceveedramon!
| The Keeper of Worlds 2/6/13 . chapter 3
Dang, I have the odd feeling Kari is going to play a role in getting Davis free, don't know why though:) Great job so far with picking the evolution lines!
| LILFOC 2/3/13 . chapter 2
Interesting...I like that each of the dark digidestined has something to grudge against one of the others
can't wait to read more
| LILFOC 2/2/13 . chapter 1
Interesting concept! I adore the first generation of digidestined
I hope you keep the use of OCs to a minimum though (as in is it only with regards to the dark digidestined? I'm suprised to see davis as he'll only be 8 like TK and Kari around this time... though i kinnda like the idea of the second generation..minus TK and Kari..being corrupted like Ken was)
I have a feeling TK and Kari (being hope and light with their angle digimon will be vital in this0
update and continue this has the potential to be really good
one critque though is that your sentancing and structure is a little broken up so its difficult to follow, detracting from the stroy
I hope your gonna focus a lot on the relationships between the digidestined (not necessarily romanace as their pretty young...hints maybe but mainly friendship and sibling bonds the latter of which the first season did oh so well)
| Crystal A. Kanbara 2/2/13 . chapter 2
O.O holy fudge you made Davis evil! but... I like it! :) hope to read more soon
| Rainden Harumi 2/2/13 . chapter 1
Pretty good so far keep going. I like this a lot.